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BuffyKaibaHuntReview:
Awesome! :) Very brilliant as well. I especially like this part:
Xander started forward then stopped as he recognized the person.
“Snyder?”
“That’s Principal Snyder. Harris.” Snyder grumbled as he stood up.
Xander grinned. “Maybe so. But I’m over 18, and graduated high school a while back. Kinda late to suspend me.”
“What?!”
“Welcome to an alternate reality. Want a drink? I’m the owner and barkeep here.”
Snyder blinked as he stared around. Then he sighed. “Figures. I don’t know which is worse. The fact I believe you or…” He glared at Xander. “The fact that your other self has got me hanging out in the library after hours sharpening weapons and helping that damned librarian research demons. Speaking of which, I need to get back. We were in a fight.”
Very creative and neat. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and brilliantly awesome writing! :)
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BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [3 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DragonelfReview:
Amusing little story.
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* O! for a muse of fire, that would ascend
¤ The brightest heaven of invention!
* A kingdom for a stage, princes to act,
¤ And monarchs to behold the swelling scene!
* - "Henry V" by William Shakespeare
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Dragonelf] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
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dogbertcarrollReview:
I liked the original story and this ain't half bad either.
I have a chapter half typed and fully written for TFTB that I didn't post in time too. I'll get around to it eventually.
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dogbertcarroll] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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BillReview:
LOL! Well done!
Review By [
Bill] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LFWReview:
Ha ha great tie-in
Review By [
LFW] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
