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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, it would be wonderful if you continued it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [30 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from Blackguard
Review:
Great story so far, any chance of it getting updated again soon?
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Please continue this story, I like it very much.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from Jhawksun
Review:
please continue this story soon.
Review By [Jhawksun] • Date [13 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from lorwen
Review:
awesome story.
can't wait for more.
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [24 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from Nomma
Review:
Good beginning. Besides, I kinda like the idea of rat!Buffy.
Review By [Nomma] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
With the exception of a couple of run-on sentences in the dialog, the story is shaping up nicely. I look forward to seeing how the storyline and characters develop over the years.

A blessing: much success to the author, and may chapters continue to pour forth.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from Fyrloche
Review:
Nice start. Don't worry, your style will improve with time and practice. A good word processing program and an English book will help. Writer's block is an unfortunate thing that happens to all of us from time to time. Real life has a nasty way of getting in the way of the creative process, sometimes. Anyway, I look forward to more.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Revelations" from Althalus
Review:
Great part.
Just like Xander to bite off more than he can chew.
You used some great arguments for Giles and Faith to stop Xander from coming. Not that it's working. But at least Xander started thinking. Together with his talk to Joyce it should calm him down a bit so that he'll survive.
And then training with Richard Dragon. Nice :-)

I guess the dream he had was a view into the future. Are you using the "One Who Sees"?
Comments from author:
Thank you, as for the "one who sees" I'd like to think the dreaming was a small touch of Morpheus to give Xander a little hope.
Review By [Althalus] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Explanations" from Bumpkin
Review:
I liked, and am looking forward to the next parts! Have got this tracked now so I don't miss a part :) Especially since you are going to be focusing on Xander now. :D

keep penning,
Marns
~pN
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Explanations" from axolotl
Review:
This is an interesting concept, the idea of them being out of time by 10 years to make the crossover transition is pretty neat. I wonder what exactly Xander got up to? Good work ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you for the compliments. I toyed with the idea of making it 20 years, but as I was outlining where I wanted to go I didn't want the age difference to be that extreme between the girls and the other characters, I have been outlining a future funny scene where Dawn points out that Buffy is now her big-little sister. Starting with the next part (which will hopefully be out over the weekend), you will start to see Xander to start the journey to become "something more".
Review By [axolotl] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Explanations" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like your flashback format. I hope Cordy somehow becomes a superhero. Maybe she is the Queen of Snark? Lol! I like the idea of Xander taken care of Dawn and Joyce and them becoming a family. I do wonder what happened to Tara and hope she somehow became a Scoobie even without 'his girls' being around. And what about Faith? Maybe I should just stop writing and let you write more so I can find out how your universe has progressed. Please write more as your story has heaping piles of potential.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for the compliment, don't worry Faith and Tara are going to be a part of the gang, but the idea of the scooby gang dynamic changes drastically with what I want to do certain characters. As for Cordy, I'm trying to think of where to put her in the story, but I think you'll just have to accept that her path as one of Angel's team is as far as I will go with the character.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Explanations" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Not really sure what happened at the end of the chapter, but othewise basically following along.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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