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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bunney
Review:
I love the whole willow/angel plot in general but you totally rushed this. You have way better stuff, and i totally think the this was a quickie for you. :) You might wanna think about redo some of your old stuff and make it even better while you try to find your groove again. Not that i won't read all of it...

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [24 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Red
Review:
I woud love to see what else youdo with this story.
Review By [Red] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
This story really makes no canon-logical sense because you’ve completely skipped over the parts where Angel and Willow actually fall in love and then expect your readers to believe that they would forget about anyone else or fall out of love with them in basically an instant.

Willow and Tara had a solid relationship at that point and they were very much in love but suddenly Willow will drop Tara because of a mystical mark? It stretches the imagination especially when you have Buffy admitting her relationship with Spike who she is ashamed of at this point in the series as well.

I’m all for people thinking outside the box and introducing characters into different relationships with different ties but without reasons or background the story falls short of being believable and just becomes disappointing.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, even though its less than appealing, the truth about this story is that I wrote it years ago when I first started writing, at that time I think most of my stories were just as shallow as this. Most had no real bearing on anything and even though I am a huge Willow/Angel fan at that point I had no real idea how to write them together. I think I've grown into a better writer since then. I posted it mostly to show how my writing has grown, and to put it somewhere else where I can recieve reviews and have people tell me whats ok about it and whats wrong since this seems to be the only site where I get both sides and not just an 'wow great story' review.

I will be adding some of my other stories to this catergory once I donate so I will not have to worry about length and such. Thank you again and have a nice day.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
It is a little choppy in spots, and there are some spelling and grammar blips.

It is also cute. Of course Angel getting on anyone about feeling sorry for themselves is just too funny.
Comments from author:
It was one of my firsts and I copied it from a website, I'll get around to correcting errors today sometime, thanks for the review and comments.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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