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Review of chapter "The Sorting" from Krysstinia
Review:
I really like this start. Please continue.
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [29 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [17 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from LadyRyn
Review:
Interesting so far. I like it! I hope you continue it!
Review By [LadyRyn] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from candydreamer
Review:
Really awesome! I hope Buffy makes some friends soon! Poor Buff...
Are the Scoobies going to be in this?
Anyway, please update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [candydreamer] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from DeanandBuffyForever
Review:
Oh please please please update!
Review By [DeanandBuffyForever] • Date [10 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
That was fantastic, I feel so bad for Buffy, I thought Draco would have been a little more supportive or her in her time of need. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Comments from author:
Buffy will find support soon, and Draco has his reasons. Thank you for the kind words and hopefully you'll have another chapter to read soon :)
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [7 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from blackroze
Review:
i love this story plz continue
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I surely intend to get another chapter out soon :)
Review By [blackroze] • Date [7 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from spygrrl
Review:
Oh, poor Buffy. That last bit made me want to cry for her. Great story so far. I'm enjoying reading it. I have a feeling I know what the twist is and I'm definitely looking forward to its unvailing!!
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you are enjoying the story so far. I hope I can continue to keep you entertained. I know the story is a little predictable but hopefully I can surprise you guys with a few twists. Let's hope my brain can come up with some good ones. Thank you for reviewing :)
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from spring
Review:
I love it. The shock value that you did was excellent. I do have to admit however that I wasn't to surprised in the house that Buffy was sorted into. Again I love this wonderful fic more soon please.
Comments from author:
Thanks! It was hard for me to even think about trying to put Buffy into any other house other than Gryffindor considering who she is and other things. I was thinking about placing her in Ravenclaw but it's so much easier to write Gryffindor seeing how that House is the most described and known about from the books and movies. I could make up my own things but I figure readers like knowing some things themselves. I've read so many stories where people review and say that didn't happen in the show/movie/book even though these are Fan Fictions. Just trying to keep with what I think readers might like. I am so glad you like the story. I hope to get the next chapter out much sooner than I did this one. Thanks for the review :)
Review By [spring] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sorting" from AllenPitt
Review:
"This is my sister, Elizabeth Potter" ? Funny slip there--- anyway, this story has great promise...hopefully it'll be a while before they all figure out what's going on... as Malfoy & slytherins make the Gryff's madder & madder, and there's poor E. Malfoy in there without any friends. Maybe she'll buddy up with Hermione.
Comments from author:
Oops, thanks for that catch. It has been fixed. And Buffy will make a friend. We'll see who in the next chapter perhaps. And it will be a while before anyone figures out what's going on ;) Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Diagon Alley" from blackroze
Review:
Love it and looking forward to the future chapters
best of writing and plz continue
Comments from author:
I hope to post chapter 2 later today :)
Review By [blackroze] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Diagon Alley" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
I think this story has a great start and I hope you continue it. I like the connection she felt around Harry Potter. I am guessing either they are twins separated or that Harry and Buffy have a destined love. Either way it will turn out to be a great story. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Comments from author:
Well I could tell you which of the two scenarios is right, but then It'd give it all away ;) Thanks and I can't wait to read some more of your story. Hopefully chapter 2 of mine will be posted today. You also have a lovely day :)
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [18 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Diagon Alley" from spring
Review:
intresting so far I hope that you upsate this fic again soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks Spring :) I hope you continue to think the story is interesting :)
Review By [spring] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Diagon Alley" from Amerie
Review:
I'm really liking this so far, very inte-rest-ing :) Hope you update soon
Comments from author:
Thank you. And hopefully later today :) Need an update from you too ;)
Review By [Amerie] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Diagon Alley" from justapiranha
Review:
Interesting plot line I have only read one other story where a Death Eater has stolen Buffy/Harry's sister as the sister connection. And that story was abandoned a few years ago. I look forward to the completion of this story.
Comments from author:
I wouldn't mind reading this other story you are talking about. Is it still available on the net? Too bad it was abandoned. I do plan to see this story through to the end. There will be many chapters, but eventually we'll reach a completion.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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