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Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from Genuka
Review:
As usual I thoroughly enjoyed these two stories... However I notice that this one is not marked complete while it is clearly complete. Just thought you might like to fix that.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from dadinkidydinkdink
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An "it's" when it should be its and a he's when it should be his in the first paragraph. "Thrown" should be throne. No real biggies.

I loved: Xander hated traveling over long distances by sandstorm it made him dizzy and got dust in places you don’t want to know about.

LOL!

Amusing again. Please, more?

4D
Review By [dadinkidydinkdink] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from Kirallie
Review:
More please?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from mayoi
Review:
i love it!!!
Review By [mayoi] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from Caliadragon
Review:
Thank you so much for this follow up. I love the idea of the two of them together and the little scenes of their lives.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from Nanelovesslash
Review:
a sequel, you made my day

"Oh how she hated latrines, and having to clean them." *LOL*

wonderful, what a fitting revenge

The whole sequel makes me laugh, well there was a little tear when Xander got that damn knife in his side, but the rest? I had so much fun reading this story

I would love to read drabbles *G*

love nane
Review By [Nanelovesslash] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from Jorrie
Review:
One glaring mistake that I can remember. You spelled Imhotep's awesome royal chair wrong. Hahaha. You spelled it "thrown" when it should be "throne". That's all I can remember, but anyways, hilarious! I love how Giles is always sputtering and fainting. ^_^ Hope to see more soon. I'll be on the look out for updates. Ta! ^_~
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from spanderfan
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I thought it was so cute! I love it when Xander has a happy ending. I love your writings. Keep up the good work. (I sound like a bad motivational speaker.)
Review By [spanderfan] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from neverwill
Review:
Thank you! I love all the little scenes that help fill in the last story.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from Afterthestorm
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All hail the great and mighty Sio, provider of slashy goodness, and supplier of wackiness! Bow to the magnificents that is the Sio!! *throws paper confetti and lights sparklers(we have a REAL low budget around here)*
* old woman comes out of nowhere*A blessing, my dear. May your typing fingers never tire, may your muse never desert you, and may all your reviews be unlit(means no flames!).*old woman dissapears*
Oook ook ooook! *review monkey says "two opposable thumbs up!*
This was great! I love the little vignettes, like snapshots of time. Thank you for this. Luv, Del
Review By [Afterthestorm] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from ReflectionsOfReality
Review:
Hmm I wonder if Xander could use another method to travel if he dislikes sand so much? Maybe with pure wind or mist? I do think that Xander is still somewhat in character though I do wonder if Imhotep has any clue how to handle his personality as he is granting Xander access to the oldest magics but Xander only desire enough power to protect his loved ones and maybe himself(though only when he is obliging Imhotep's urges). Funny enough this type of personality would make the perfect leader as he would only want what is best for his country and its people combine Inhotep's offense and Xander's defense and really their is no way that the two could fail to conquer the world and keep it.

I wonder on a side not how Imhotep would react to something like the Evil Overlords guide list or other items of modern day society. Also any chance that Imhotep might try to convince Xander to share the throne with him? Or at least early on a single day that Imhotep has Xander sitting on the throne and everything going wrong (even though Xander seems to be able to handle it, it would still be stressful). I really wonder at how Xander might wheedle Imhotep trying to get electricity and maybe a satellite dish.

~Reflections
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from jakquill
Review:
This is still a cool world and I thank you for writing more so soon!

Love this universe

btw, as you noted it is unbeta so I only winced at a couple of things but the story/snippets just pulled me right in...
Review By [jakquill] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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Xander is one lucky lucky boy.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wonder of Sequels" from nomadbeth
Review:
bless! this was the best follow-up. hee!!!
Review By [nomadbeth] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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