Review of chapter "The Weight of a Feather" from kribby
OH! This is so sweet!
Oh, I think you might want to have Sha're call Daniel, Dan'iel in her head... in one of the first few paragraphs you write her thoughts as thinking of where Daniel might be...
Yeah, not much of a criticism... I know.
I really liked this.
You know, some fanfic writers write Dan'iel as Dan'yel... whatever... just figured I'd make mention of it.
Review By [kribby
] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated