I would like to say that I really enjoy your stories. This one is very good and I pleasantly anticipate the rest of this story. I hope you continue this and a few others. *please please* I can't wait for the scene when J C and Asher meets her. I think that she should be the one for Asher. It would be soooo cute. Asher doesn't age due to being a vampire and as Faith ages the feelings changing and becoming more. Asher has the whole Angel brooding thing down and would so be a familiar personality she can relate to.
Review By [teddybear] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I totally love younger!Faith with 'mommy' Anita and her having most of her horrible memories erased or at least suppressed, thus giving her a new chance at life is just a brilliant idea. I also adore 'Da' Nathaniel and how he thinks of Faith as his and how around her he's less submissive. Just awesome!
I definitely look forward to hopefully, reading more of this fabulous story! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Not Rated
I love this piece nice shot of redemtion for Faith and I love Nathaniel is getting some backbone. I Love the character and hate how he is often treated. I do hope there is more when you have time and the muse allows it.
Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
I love this piece nice shot of redemtion for Faith and I love Nathaniel is getting some backbone. I Love the character and hate how he is often treated. I do hope there is more when you have time and the muse allows it.
Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Please explain to your muse that money is nto as important as feeding the imagination of rabid fans.
Congrats on the gig, tho.
Comments from author:
It fell through...taking my muse and inspiration with it. Humph. Ah well...never mind. I got into university for this coming year! YAY! and, as another author said to me recently: with my maths skills, which are the reason I'm studying three languages, I predict that this story will be finished...hehehe. Glad you liked it! thanks for the review, love xx Shezzi
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]