Review of chapter "Chapter One" from junnights
would love having more to read:) need more of the story please:) hehe
but like it
Review By [junnights
] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ReflectionsOfReality
I wish they were longer but I can't really begrudge your snippets.
The only thing that occurred to me was that I wish that you had more Xander, the two ways that could happen would be a Dawn/Willow express or Xander Ascends without being under the Ascended's rules and tracks down the rest of his Pack.
Scary thought if Xander gained something from each of his supernatural incidents instead of it fading away. Considering that he kept something from the Soldier I am kinda disappointed that he did not gain more from the joining spell. Fun if cannon Xander played dumb in the amount magical knowledge he retained, particularly that some of the magic that Willow shot at him could essentially have come from some of the most magical texts in the world...
Bad thought that I will have to share with others,
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality
] • Date [11 May 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
What an intriguing series!
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [5 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
I like this, but I'm a little lost. Will you be writing the beginning of the story back in Sunnydale and the actual events of what preceded story 1?
Comments from author:
at this point no but i do have a definate arc for this story line and the sequel will be longer and explain whats going on. I'm aiming to make the readers as interested in finding out exactly what is happening as the atlantians are. McKay and the SHSG will have to explain what is going on when a character from buffy comes to Atlantis.
Review By [neverwill
] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]