I like the first story immensely, I found the second chapter portrayed Faith as too much of a victim.
Comments from author:
upon reviewing the story, I agree, but I think that all of us are weak every now and then. I also think Faith is a lot more of a victim than most people realize. She just bottles everything up and pretends nothing is wrong, I empathize with her. I prefer the first story as well. - D
Review By [Kiwikatipo] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Not Rated
I like it! It's hard to write a vulnerable Faith, but you did a good job. My only thing is that I don't get how she'd be able to answer all those questions while she was hammered, but hey, slayer stamina probably helps with that! Good job on both of these! :)
Comments from author:
I answer questions hammered all the time, and puking clears your head a little .... - D
Review By [ChaosJunkie] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated