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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from BankruptSamurai
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While I hadn't been too sure of what to think of this going in - mostly because people either write Jinx poorly, make the unforgivable mistake of using the standard DC Jinx (Indian elemental witch) or simply swap her attitude with Faith written at her worst (all there is, was and ever will be is sex and things relating to it) - I can safely say that "Bad Luck" was great. Well written, the character's were well thought out given the brevity of the story and Xander and Jinx' relationship was pretty damn cute, from start to finish. Considering I read this story as a romance, well, it deserves an overly elaborate but immensely satisfying fist-bump.

Plus, I kinda loved that for once, Xander stayed in the non-Buffy universe with just a promise to visit with his friends and family. Sure he still has a chance to kick ass and do the hero thing, but it's pretty neat to see a Xander who's willing to choose something he wants over his friends.

It's so very grown up. Makes me wanna cry like I'm in an Anime. :D
Review By [BankruptSamurai] • Date [26 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from agnar
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Okay, the table of defecation? Hahaha that was awesome! Funniest damned thing I've read in awhile, didn't see it coming.

Gotta be about the funniest Starfire verbal mixup I've seen.
Review By [agnar] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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A bit sappy, but overall quite good!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Zarohk
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Aww, man! I was hoping for some Willow-Raven interaction. Partially because magic-centered shop-talk is cool, partially because that's a relationship (or friendship) I could see going interesting places. Except for a little difference in distribution of darkness (Willow's is internal and psychological, while Raven's is external and paternal) they're very similar: book-loving intelligent introverts with heaping gobs of magical power. Also, they're both generally mature, rational people who cause very bad things to happen when they run on emotion alone.
Review By [Zarohk] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Zarohk
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The blond, blue-eyed / Tara who died.
For some reason, I've never seen a fanfic where Tara (TT) has, lacking memory of her previous life, grown up and gone to college (becoming BtVS Tara). You didn't quite make that connection, but Xander almost did.
Also, I love the fact that you delved a little into the interesting side of Raven's empathic powers in a tower full of teenagers:
“You got laid last night,” Raven said as she sipped her tea.
“Think about it. She’s an empath. Meaning she feels what other people feel. Including what people are feeling mid-coitus. Raven’s been feeling that."
Just some of the funniest implications for empathic powers.
Review By [Zarohk] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Starfox
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It was an interesting and original story. I very much liked Xander hanging back and not jumping into heroic life in an alternate dimension. The Buffy/DC balance seemed well as well, and the cameos and gags were well-placed.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from deathgeonous
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Cute fic. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from JediKnight
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Sorry I took so long to review this story, you did a nice job in my opinion.

-Also, are you familiar with the new cartoon "Young Justice"?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [24 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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I really enjoyed this story. Thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Fayari
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Made me go from rom :) to :D in 4.5 seconds...
Review By [Fayari] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Dragonelf
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You did a great job with this story.


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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Razial
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cool story, I liked it alot. well written and in a style that intrigued me what was next when I hit the next chapter bar

david
Review By [Razial] • Date [28 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from wswords
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I liked the story and am sorry you lost interest in it. I am glad you added the ending though, since I wouldn't have read it otherwise.
Review By [wswords] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Obsidian
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Great story. loved it!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Gideon
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Good work, I enjoyed the story and the ending was fine. Not great perhaps but still pretty good. Well done on taking it right to the end and finishing it.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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