Here's to hoping you have the next part redone in your mind and ready to write some more... I love the story so far and can't wait till you get the next chapter done. (David was thrown into the antlers and I don't remember him dusting- you could say that they didn't pierce his heart like they would have had to.)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LizzerdSkin
Review:
Hey, Please write more of this, it's awesome!!! If she goes back to david's world have her meet the boys. . that would be cooleo
Comments from author:
Well, actually I wasn't going to, but I've been so busy that I haven't been able to write, until recently and I was thinking about what I had planned for this story and realized I didn't like the way it was playing out in my head.. so I may change it up, I was going to have her save just David at the end of the movie, but I've thought about it, and I plan to put more interaction between 'the boys' and Willow in the coming chapters. :) Thanks for reading my story by the way :)
Review By [LizzerdSkin] • Date [16 May 09] • Not Rated
Just saw the movie and went looking for some good ficage... lucky for me I stumbled upon this story! This is very fun and wonderful! Cannot wait to see more in the saga of Willow and David!
^_^
Danke
Comments from author:
Thank you! I was just trying to find a way for David not to die at the end of the movie actually, and I had this just come into my head one night. I honestly still have the next parts fleshed out in my mind, but I haven't had the opportunity to write very much this past year... But I hope to be able to again soon! :)
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]