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Review of chapter "Part Nineteen: Emotions Running Amuck" from Risingashes
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The characters appear to be poorly done cardboard cutouts. The things everyone is saying just sounds wrong, interactions are completely off, in some sections it's almost painful to read.

I get the feeling while reading through the story that everyone is somewhat dazed and confused, unaware of who they are and where they are going- forcing themselves through lines to simply grind the plot along.

The premise is interesting, however a potentially good crossover is cheapened by the characters not actually sounding anything like the original characters would.
Review By [Risingashes] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Two: Freedom Always Comes With A Cost" from purrfus
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Very interesting setup. I'll have to come back and finish it later though because as intense as it has been so far I think I need a little comedy.
Comments from author:
Did you get the chance to go back and read this fic? I'm not pestering, only curious to see how you felt about it. You leave such wonderfully critical reviews - something that I appreciate and cherish!

Happy New Year!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "the vulnerability of faith" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Since this story involves Faith and Duncan, might I suggest an interesting site: www.wandererverse.com. A buffy/highlander site, where Buffy is an immortal slayer, and Faith is still good. So far so good on the story.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "the vulnerability of faith" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Lovit! Great teaming of different shows! I especially like the fact that Richie is alive.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [2 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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