Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Unrequited romance

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin
Review:
awww, they're cute. It's very Remus Lupin/N. Tonks, too...well, sorta.

Yay for akward!Giles!
Review By [(Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
Cute. Sappy and a bit melodramatic, but cute. Point of interest: grammatically speaking, the last word should be resignation, not resignment. There's no such thing as 'resignment'. Also, misunderstanding of reciprocated interest (thus not unrequited, by the way, as an unrequited anything means that it is by definition entirely one-sided) that's THAT obvious is baffling and kinda sad. I never thought Giles was that oblivious around women. Shy and awkward, yes, but he did know how to pick up hints when they were hitting him like sledgehammers. But yeah, cute. ^_^
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Not Rated
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking