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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from docfeng
Review:
more please
Review By [docfeng] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Oh, poor Graham! What's going to happen to him, and will Cassie return to rescue him? Looking forward to your next chapter!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Oh, poor Graham! He never gets the easy job, does he? And yeah, after spending time with the Scoobies he'd definitely listen to the teenage female! Thanks for sharing this!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from iceworm
Review:
While it's not unheard of for there to be a multi-month gap in a long, on-going story, I don't think such a "pause" - after only one chapter has appeared - gives much hope for the second ever showing up. Besides being a waste of a terrific opening chapter this means that I now have to go searching all over the internet for other fic by you to see if this story was a fluke, which I doubt, or an indication that I've found someone I'd like to read more of. Life is too short for such disappointments.
Review By [iceworm] • Date [7 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
this is a very good, tautly written start. Finish it. That's an order. Make it so.

Wild Blue.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [6 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zafaran
Review:
Oy vay. Poor Graham. Considering worse is rapidly heading to worse, is there any chance of snatching some kink of help from Buffy and company? or are Graham and Cassie solo all the way? Any chance of getting more chapters anytime soon? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)liability
Review:
very good, more please!
Review By [(Current Donor)liability] • Date [9 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alyssara
Review:
More! More!! More!!! Please?
Comments from author:
I'm definitely writing more, but it will be a while yet before I get it ready to post.
Review By [Alyssara] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Booster
Review:
*snerk* Poor Graham. Looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm really proud you're liking it.
Review By [Booster] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Good start!

Hope there's more ready soon. I look forward to it.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it so far! The next chapter won't be out for a bit yet, though.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ElaineRhodes
Review:
Yep, there are some days you just shouldn't answer the phone...looking forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Yeah, some days it just doesn't pay to get up. Thanks for your well-wishes and yes, there will be another chapter. Eventually.
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamJames
Review:
Interesting premise and not a combo I've seen before. I like that Cassie doesn't trust Graham at first. Worth continuing.
Comments from author:
I've always liked Graham: he seems like a combination of soldier solidity, loyalty and mild-to-moderate deviousness. For example, I totally believe he manipulated Riley into breaking up with Buffy. I mean, he played on issues that were already there and it may not have been entirely the wrong thing to do, but he definitely played on Riley's insecurities just before the dramatic break-up. And in spite of that, he still manages to be a pretty good guy, trying to do the right thing.

Cassie I understand a little less well. I know she's smart and driven, but I don't always get her motivations. She's fun, though!
Review By [SamJames] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marita
Review:
Wonderful and very original...
Please MORE!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Marita] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DrDamage
Review:
This is very cool. I'm loving the tale.

It has an interesting story and it's very well written. I'm definitely looking forward to more of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks! It'll probably be a little while before the next chapter, though...
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
Review:
You know Rome is Buffy's turf, so there is a change there is a slayer in the museum. They might even have trailed the Jaffas.

But I don't think you'll go that way. Because it is Graham and Cassie's trip, which means the help of a slayer or two would only shorten the trip. But they might help them to escape in the divergent.
Comments from author:
You're the second person who pointed out that Graham and Cassie might actually run into the Scoobies in Rome, which is funny because I'd almost totally forgotten. I was just thinking of Rome as somewhere with very deep history, churches and lots of catacombs.

You're right, though--Graham and Cassie are on their own. At least for now. ;)
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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