I have never watched the series. although I know about it so any changes you made do not bother me. I enjoy the chapters you have written and hope you continue the story. Thanks for sharing with us and hope to see more soon.

Happy New Year and god bless.

I like the story. I hope you will continue righting it.

After reading all the chapters so far, I can't continue; Demona is acting too OOC without a good reason and I noticed you pulled Wisp as Willow's Gargoyle name (again) without even giving a good reason. Sorry, but you either need to watch the series again, rework this plot into something that isn't a total rip-off or preferably both.

I have to say I am a bit confused by this willow. Suddenly bonds with Demona in more ways than one, seemingly gives up on her friends even her life long crush and best friend Xander. Then you have Xander showing no real effects from Halloween despite fact Ethan said he over dosed his costume just as much as willow did, and he was the center of far more magic than Willow ever was.

I had honestly expected him to be willows equivlent of Macbeth, her linked 'soul mate' of sort that she can't die until he kills her and vice versa. Add in the comments of over dosed magic, 'soldier' costume that could been macbeth etc I am a bit disapointed how Xander and th Sunnydale aspect of the story all but fell behind. Willow freaking bonded with Dawn more than her best friend Xander since the change!

Most of the problems you've mentioned are based on the fact that I haven't mentioned the Scooby gang much at all. This is mostly because the plot hasn't touched them much.

The bonding with Dawn wasn't sudden, just retroactive; gotta hate those monks at times. Additionally, the whole 'Tell your friends and they die' thing is a fairly good deterent. Dawn found out on her own, sort of, so she was deemed safe, for the moment.

As for the soldier thing, thanks for reminding me. Forgot about that. It'll show up later, when it's plot relevent.

Goliath made a colossal idiot out of his self there.

“You do mean Demona's human form, right?” Elisa asked. “I mean, she can't be half gargoyle, right?” After a moment, she turned on Demona and demanded, “And where is Willow? You didn't make her walk her, did you?”
Left the e off here at the end of the sentence.

Enjoyed the chapter, but I noted a few mistakes in spelling.

“I'm sure it'll it you perfectly.”
Seems you left the f off fit here.

Willow, could yo take her, so Dominique and I can have a private chat?”
And, you left the u off you.

“I may not have been properly involved in my daughter's life before, but nothing you do will stop me from being there fore her from now on.”
You may have added a e to for in this sentence.

“While using Sheila as bait would probably garner faster results, allowing her to come into close contact with a vampire wold be extremely dangerous for her,” Demona pointed out.
Left out a u in would in the second line.

It's nice to see an update, those poor poor vampires, oh wait no not really. :)
I think she needs some armor though.

Nice, having Dawn know is actually very useful as she can cover for Willow somewhat. "Oh, I was over at Willows" or something similar that works for explaining why she was not hanging out with the gang.

Another reader joins in the dancing...

YES!!! new gargoyle willow!!! ~does happy dance~ I loved it can't wait for more

I have to say; I find what you're setting up for Dawn more interesting then anything else at the moment. I look forward to the new chapters to see where you go with this.

Goliath suffers from political correctness.

Of all beings, he should be glad of peace, but his absolute (if repressed) loathing of magic after what's gone down in his life has just firmly put his head up his ass.

Assuming Willow doesn't get in trouble with her first, Eliza may just whap lavendar-boy upside the head.

Now Eliza, Sheila and Fox have to kindly explain to Goliath that he basically acted like a prick, and that if he wants to mend things, he's going to grovel like a professional.

I like your story a lot. While I think your version of Sheila turned into a good mother very quickly, for your story I'll accept it. Lol! I'm a bit worried about Dawn and just what Dru wants her for. The whole blood thing is very worrying. I hope you continue your story as I want to see Willow/Wisp kick some very rude gargoyle's butts. Lol!