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Review of chapter "Demonic Blender" from Harry
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Sounds like between Xanatos, Sheila, Owen/Puck, and Demona, Goliath is getting his eyes opened. And Angela: I think she and Wisp are going to get along fine. But I am worried about this spell that Drusilla wants cast. Whatever it is, its NOT good!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meetings gone awry" from Harry
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Oh lord! This did NOT go well! Time to see what can be done to salvage this situation. And its going to take a lot to do that!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting to Know You" from Harry
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Well, its good to see that Sheila and Willow's new mother bonded so well. And learning about the things that go bump in the night helped with the new job offer. Now, onto New York, to explain things to Ira, and to meet the Clan!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Midnight Meetings" from Harry
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So, Dawn has a crush on Lexington eh? This WILL come in handy once Willow and Demona head to New York. Blackmail is So much easier when you know both sides!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Harry
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You're not the only one who read Wispr's work on FF.net. I used to love reading her work, and I loved her Gargoyle story. If you even come HALFWAY close to what she did in that tale, you have a winner on your hands.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Demonic Blender" from Traveler
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I have never watched the series. although I know about it so any changes you made do not bother me. I enjoy the chapters you have written and hope you continue the story. Thanks for sharing with us and hope to see more soon.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from BlueEyedJedi
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Happy New Year and god bless.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demonic Blender" from fireinu
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I like the story. I hope you will continue righting it.
Review By [fireinu] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demonic Blender" from Musicalife
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After reading all the chapters so far, I can't continue; Demona is acting too OOC without a good reason and I noticed you pulled Wisp as Willow's Gargoyle name (again) without even giving a good reason. Sorry, but you either need to watch the series again, rework this plot into something that isn't a total rip-off or preferably both.
Review By [Musicalife] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meetings gone awry" from Vilkath
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I have to say I am a bit confused by this willow. Suddenly bonds with Demona in more ways than one, seemingly gives up on her friends even her life long crush and best friend Xander. Then you have Xander showing no real effects from Halloween despite fact Ethan said he over dosed his costume just as much as willow did, and he was the center of far more magic than Willow ever was.

I had honestly expected him to be willows equivlent of Macbeth, her linked 'soul mate' of sort that she can't die until he kills her and vice versa. Add in the comments of over dosed magic, 'soldier' costume that could been macbeth etc I am a bit disapointed how Xander and th Sunnydale aspect of the story all but fell behind. Willow freaking bonded with Dawn more than her best friend Xander since the change!
Comments from author:
Most of the problems you've mentioned are based on the fact that I haven't mentioned the Scooby gang much at all. This is mostly because the plot hasn't touched them much.

The bonding with Dawn wasn't sudden, just retroactive; gotta hate those monks at times. Additionally, the whole 'Tell your friends and they die' thing is a fairly good deterent. Dawn found out on her own, sort of, so she was deemed safe, for the moment.

As for the soldier thing, thanks for reminding me. Forgot about that. It'll show up later, when it's plot relevent.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [29 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meetings gone awry" from Riniko
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Goliath made a colossal idiot out of his self there.

“You do mean Demona's human form, right?” Elisa asked. “I mean, she can't be half gargoyle, right?” After a moment, she turned on Demona and demanded, “And where is Willow? You didn't make her walk her, did you?”
Left the e off here at the end of the sentence.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting to Know You" from Riniko
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Enjoyed the chapter, but I noted a few mistakes in spelling.

“I'm sure it'll it you perfectly.”
Seems you left the f off fit here.

Willow, could yo take her, so Dominique and I can have a private chat?”
And, you left the u off you.

“I may not have been properly involved in my daughter's life before, but nothing you do will stop me from being there fore her from now on.”
You may have added a e to for in this sentence.

“While using Sheila as bait would probably garner faster results, allowing her to come into close contact with a vampire wold be extremely dangerous for her,” Demona pointed out.
Left out a u in would in the second line.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from MistofRainbows
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It's nice to see an update, those poor poor vampires, oh wait no not really. :)
I think she needs some armor though.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Midnight Meetings" from Riniko
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Nice, having Dawn know is actually very useful as she can cover for Willow somewhat. "Oh, I was over at Willows" or something similar that works for explaining why she was not hanging out with the gang.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demonic Blender" from draconis
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Another reader joins in the dancing...
Review By [draconis] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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