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Taking the Initiative

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Review of chapter "Welcome to the Initiative" from Alkeni
Review:
Good start. Even if I wanted to point out to the pair of them that US law and the constition doesn't touch on if someone is human or not. It's kind of assumed. But technically... :p

Not that it changes that he's Walsh's prisoner, but still.

*continues to read the fic*
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [14 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things are worse" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things are worse" from grd
Review:
About damn time someone put two and two together hope they can now FUBAR the government plans. Please make it humiliating for the gov stooges.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things are worse" from AceDreamer
Review:
This seems to be working well.

I re-read the story, and it reads consistently smoothly through-out.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I usually reread the preceding story parts myself to get the flow of my thoughts for the new part to mesh seamlessly with them.
Review By [AceDreamer] • Date [7 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things could be worse." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things could be worse." from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
Nice to see this is being continued. It's been one of my favorite stories for a long time.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day 6 Part III" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day 6 Part II" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations and Plans II" from randomguy
Review:
Really interesting story, had to force myself to stop reading so I could get stuff done. Looking forward to reading the rest.
Review By [randomguy] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day 6" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day 6" from bookworm
Review:
It's really rather creepy being inside their heads like this. Here's hoping Giles or another ally cottons on quickly enough.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Convergence" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Further into the web" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Further into the web" from grd
Review:
Angleman and Walsh cannot get eaten quick enough by any demon. Manipulative bastards like this deserve the worst and most painful fate. Humilations galore. Please!
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hurry up and wait" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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