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Halloween World Side Story - Scourge of Time

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Review of chapter "CHAPTER 44: THE RACE Part 5/5" from TexasJack
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Love the story so far. Halloween World is a great story. As a side story since there are so many copies running around You could gather characters together and send them off into the galaxy. If Stargate/Star Wars/Star Trek/etc... all of these empires now exist next to each other there are going to be galactic wars. Or Hallow Earth could be sending out people to kill the bad guys and unite the universe under the banner of the Chaotic Empire.
Review By [TexasJack] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHAPTER 44: THE RACE Part 5/5" from singerrenn
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I love the story so far and feel that like Halloween World it has a lot of potential. I wonder when you will be able to release all of the saved people in the digivices as well as what happened to InuYasha's cast. I would love to see them appear in a more western genre such as a comic-verse which would allow the scourge to have some idea as to what is happening. Also the whole, Angel - Angelous interaction is very confusing to me as I think that it would make more sense that they are slowly merging. Otherwise I could see it manifesting into MPD or DID. Please continue, your work is chaos incarnate and has given me more plotbunnies then I know what to do with.
Review By [singerrenn] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHAPTER 44: THE RACE Part 5/5" from DanyellaSkyler
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I put a vote in for them going to Avatar.
Review By [DanyellaSkyler] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHAPTER 44: THE RACE Part 5/5" from xon
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I'm torn between BLEACH and the MARVEL/DC hybrid universe.
Review By [xon] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHAPTER 44: THE RACE Part 5/5" from Tobias
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Good arc. for the next arc please Ranma 1/2 or Slayers.
Review By [Tobias] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "FMA ARC 2 - The Gate Part 3" from DarkGoddess
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Interesting application of my demon ideas. I like it ^_^

Demons

Malthus-a demonic raven roughly the size of a large dog. He specializes in weapons.

Flauros-an anthropomorphic leopard demon with large claws. He specializes in knowledge of the past, present and future.

Leraje-a demon in the form of a handsome archer clad in green. His arrows cause disease and decay.

I would also like to suggest an alchemist, Isaac McDougal, the Freezing Alchemist. He only appears in the second anime series, but I thought he was kind of an interesting character. If you haven’t had a chance to catch the new anime, you can find info on him here:

http://fma.wikia.com/wiki/Isaac_McDougal
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "FMA ARC 2 - The Gate Part 2" from DarkGoddess
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Since Amestris is a Western-style locale in which Christianity once existed, I've looked up some demons from Christian demonology for the Castle Lords to create.

Paimon-A muscular man with an effeminate face who has the webbed feet of a duck and a lizard-like tail. He always wears a crown and rides a demonic camel. He offers great knowledge in exchange for souls and service to the Castle Lords.

Aim-a demon with three heads: a serpent, a man, and a cat. He wields a flaming sword. He burns houses and even cities to the ground in exchange for souls and service to the Castle Lords.

Glasya-Labolas-a demonic dog with the wings of an eagle. In exchange for souls and service to the Castle Lords, he casts love spells.

Forneus-a demon resembling a plesiosaur. He offers renown in exchange for souls and service to the Castle Lords.

Furfur-a demon with the torso of a man, the head and lower body of a deer, and wings. He has the power to control weather and offers his services in exchange for souls and service to the Castle Lords.
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [23 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "FMA ARC 1 - The Gate Part 1" from KikiOverkill
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I'm having some trouble coming up with ideas this week, but here are some chimeras anyway.

A lion with the stinger of a scorpion and venous snake fangs

A pack of dog/bear chimeras (the bears give them increased size while the dogs make them loyal and intelligent)
Review By [KikiOverkill] • Date [10 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "FMA ARC 1 - The Gate Part 1" from DarkGoddess
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I would appreciate it if Lust survives (she was my favorite homunculus in the anime) and I want her and the Elric brothers to travel the multiverse with the Scourge.

What with the theme of the seven sins in FMA, I think demons based on them would be appropriate as servants of the Castle Lords. I also decided to go for some irony by having those they are created from be victims of the sins.

The Sins

A succubus (lust)-a beautiful woman in skimpy leather clothing with bat-like wings, long, sharp nails painted black, and blood red eyes. She is capable of assuming the form of the person her victim desires most. The Castle Lords created her from the souls of prostitutes and victims of sexual assault.

A wolf (gluttony)-an enormous, skinless wolf that can expand its mouth to devour almost anything and it has acidic saliva. The Castle Lords created him from the souls of those who died of starvation.

A tentacled, green eye (envy)-exactly what it sounds like. It covets all that belongs everyone else, from useless trinkets to valuables, and kills to take them. The Castle Lords created it from the souls of those who died bitter because everyone had nicer things than them.

A giant sloth (sloth)-also exactly what it sounds like. It prefers sleeping over fighting, but is a powerful foe if provoked. It was created from the souls of those who worked themselves to death.

A burning man (wrath)-a humanoid creature whose body is constantly aflame because it burns with rage. It was created from the souls of those killed in a fit of anger.

A golem (greed)-specifically, a golem made of gold, jewels, and other valuable things. It constantly seeks to add precious things to itself. It was created from the souls of poor tenants who died because of the greed of their landlords (I just read A Modest Proposal so that was the first thing that came to mind).

A king (pride)-a mighty looking man with all the trappings of royalty. He always seeks to prove that he is better than everyone at everything. He was created from the souls of those who died feeling worthless.
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [10 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Chapter - Arc Decision 2/2" from DarkGoddess
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Fullmetal Alchemist
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Chapter - Arc Decision 1/2" from KikiOverkill
Review:
Fullmetal Alchemist Anime
Review By [KikiOverkill] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Chapter - Arc Decision 1/2" from DarkGoddess
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I vote for Fullmetal Alchemist.
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Chapter - Arc Decision 1/2" from xon
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Hybrid Marvel/DC universe.
Review By [xon] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A TWISTED FEUDAL FAIRYTALE Arc 2 Broken Mirror 8" from DarkGoddess
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Not much to say about this chapter. The fight scenes were nice, but that's pretty par for the course for your work. Your comment about changing up the style has made me curious though. If you don't mind telling me (and I understand if you want to keep it secret), what exactly will the next arc be? Will they set out into the multiverse again or do you have something else planned? Does focusing on a smaller group mean that some characters will get left behind? Again, I don't mind if you'd rather not spill everything just yet, but I'm very curious.
Comments from author:
I'm thinking off seperate a small group from the rest. Part of the arc would be locating there missing members. As for what my next crossover will be, I'm having a poll. It should be on FanfictionDOTnet, but you can vote on Mediaminer.

1 Fullmetal Alchemist Anime
2 Ranma and the works of Rumiko Takahashi
3 Avatar: The Last Airbender
4 The Slayers as in Lina Inverse.
I have original TV, Next, Try, and OAV, and have watched some of the new series.
5 Hybrid - Marvel and DC Universe
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A TWISTED FEUDAL FAIRYTALE Arc 2 Broken Mirror 8" from KikiOverkill
Review:
So, the final battle is about to begin. I can't wait! I'm also interested in seeing these stylistic changes you mentioned.
Comments from author:
Actually, the Castle Lords are finished with the world of Inuyasha. The heroes will find themselves on a few world, looking for comrades and tracking the Lords as they move threw dimensions.

Remember, according to Halloween World, they were originally incarnations of Naraku! Remember how long it took to stop Naraku and how many times he escaped.
Review By [KikiOverkill] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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