I really enjoyed your story. I'm thrilled you've decided to continue the series. Xander and Yusuke make great brothers. I look forward to “Prophecy Breaker”!
Review By [mokahi] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Well, that's one way to get rid of Tony Harris. The only disadvantage is if someone turns him. That could get nastier than he is naturally. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
...I never thought about anyone turning him...oops. Nah, never happen. Yusuke made a lasting impression at Willy's. I also hope my muse and schedule are agreeable this summer. This fic is almost done though, just one more chapter...then I can work on the sequel. XD
Thanks for commenting! ^^
Review By [zafaran] • Date [11 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Go Yusuke!! WIll he get eaten? Was the vampire near the Summer's anyone important?
Comments from author:
Yes, Yusuke is the ultimate big brother. I haven't actually decided if Tony is gonna get eaten...its mighty tempting. As for the vampire hanging around Buffy's house...I have no idea. Could be the Master sent a minion to check out the rumors of a new powerful demon in town. Or it could be the brood master, we may find out later on.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
yay! i hope that bastard Tony gets eaten! ^^ i really love this story so i'm hoping that you'll update it regularly, but if not, i still really enjoyed reading what you've written. ^^
Comments from author:
Well surely I'll finish it soon. *crosses fingers* I only have one more chapter planned for this fic...then we'll have a sequel. ^^
Review By [LaughingManiac] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great work. I haven't actually read/seen YuYu Hakushu but know of the characters so to speak, and I actually can see it happening without any problems at all. Really looking forward to more.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Good job so far. Sooner or later word of Xander's brother will get back to the mayor. I can't help but wonder how he'll respond.
Comments from author:
Ack! I hadn't even thought about the mayor! Good thing this is only season one stuff. And here I was just worried about the next story or two. Thanks for mentioning the mayor, I'll go make a note of it.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
