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Review of chapter "A New Home" from spring
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I love this fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Home" from shazzump
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i really liked this story.. i hope to see a continuation of it ... im voting for a xander/remy pairing eventual.
Review By [shazzump] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Home" from mithrilandtj
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This is an interesting series
I always liked the idea of Logan being Xan's Dad.

But in your series listing, you've got "A New Home" as the 2nd story when it should be the 1st.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [18 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Home" from Anonymous Reviewer
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WHat did Willow have to say/do to convince Xander to go? How is it that they can tell his mutations from the blood test? How come it hasn't manifested before? If Jean and Scott are together, but she has affections for Logan how does the "lost" son influence her?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [13 Aug 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Home" from Anonymous Reviewer
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It's really rude to just read someone's mind. Charles probably has less scrupples about it since he had to learn on his own (or did he) to control his powers, while Jean has probably been told that it is rude to just read people's minds. Heck, if I was an unsure mutant, I think I would get freakin mad if someone I didn't know went through my brain and downloaded my memories for their personal information/amusement.

Who is Rouge...isn't rouge a type of cheek highlighter....powdery reddish stuff that's darker or lighter than your own skin? You've got Rogue once and Rouge down a couple of times so maybe you should fix that lil' mistake and change it all to Rogue.

This is different from your other Xmen crossover stories right?
Cause I can easily get confused...but I'm sure you'll identify them as being in what series as necessary.

Exactly how do they know he can bring back the dead? Cause unless he demonstrated that power at some point while at Sunnyhell I don't see how they can JUST know. As for the defy gravity thing, maybe they ran a DNA analysis and found his X factor was similar to Sam the Cannonball.

Well keep writing.
At least the ideas are interesting enough. You just need to expand on them now.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Aug 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Home" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Great Start! Xander as Logan's son is a great idea. I think that you should update soon!Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Aug 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Home" from Anonymous Reviewer
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That was great! You should turn it into a series or something!
Thanks :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Aug 03] • Not Rated
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