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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Keshkreature
Review:
Oh cool! I'd love to read about her going and meeting Legolas again after all this time!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elenea
Review:
Wow, now there's a nice idea. It makes sence, I love it.
Review By [Elenea] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kaiyama
Review:
This is a great angle to come from since quite franky, Maia or not, Gandalf still a guy, and if he's been alive so freaking long he'd had to gotten it on and had some kids. It makes great sense that Dawn of the uber powerful key magic would really be his kid. Is Legolas be her significant other in this? I can't wait to see more people flip out at the sight of Gandalf with his daughter!
Comments from author:
thanks! and yes, Legolas is meant to be her other half...i will continue it at some point i just don't know when (and my muse keeps escaping! arrrgh!) i thought it made sense, and it just kinda wrote itself (as all the best stories tend to do) thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Kaiyama] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from scarlettiris
Review:
Gandalf... you sly devil you. (I don't know why I had the urge to say that.)

I've really enjoyed this so far. I sincerely hope you continue!
Comments from author:
i have to admit I don't either...but thats all right :)

Really glad you liked it, there will be more at some indeterminate point in the future (which is why I've tried to end at places where it won't matter too much) thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [scarlettiris] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nosi
Review:
Another lovely one. I'm thinking the ring is due for an appearance soon, thus disrupting father-daughter time and all these plans to visit old friends. Hoping to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Yes, the Ring will be making it's debut shortly...yes, it will most likely disrupt such plans. there will be more, but i'm not sure when! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Nosi] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dawnlady
Review:
Please, please please will you continue this story?
This is one of the more intriguing ideas of getting a scooby a place on Middleearth
In plain words, I love it!
And I would really like to read more of it...
Comments from author:
There will be more...I just don't know when, which is the beauty of writing a one-shot series :) really really glad you like it! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Dawnlady] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Graycalls
Review:
I love this story, but you spelled Rivendell wrong.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it, and thank you, I will fix it :) love xx Shezzi
Review By [Graycalls] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
well at least she's got the languages --learning new ones is not fun.... I wonder if any of the magic she learned associating with Willow & Tara will help her in Middle Earth...
Comments from author:
Well, I don't know about Sunnydale magic, but she's got her lessons from her father to draw on...and there will be more :) thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi BTW I guess I have a strange idea of fun, cos I love learning new languages :)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fyrloche
Review:
I love it and look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll write another one when I can! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from anouk
Review:
Interesting, only you had some spelling mistakes - it should be Istari not Istasi and I think half elf. THe "half blood" bit made me think of Harry Potter ;)
I don't think Gandalf would age much, not that anyone would notice in 100 something years. He is basically immortal, lesser god. And his body on Middle Earth is of his choosing - I don't think he has a body as such on the other shore, at least he didn't from what I remember of some additional texts in Unfinished tales, ... I think (unless I've read too much fanfiction and it all got horribly mixed together... oh well, ignore this ramble). Anyway, I like it so far :) Don't rush it.
Comments from author:
yeah thanks it's a typo, i'll fix it :) and the other bit. I know that Gandalf wouldn't age physically unless he wanted to, sort of, but think about what he's been through in the last century and a half...he's lost his daughter, worked through that loss, grief changes anyone...so yeah, I made him age just a little bit, and only someone who has seen him as completely unchanging (as Dawn did in her dreams) would notice. thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [anouk] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dudeyourwack
Review:
Hey, you should seriously turn this into a longer story.
I love the idea of it.
If you have the time please expand...
keep up the great work!! =)
Comments from author:
I want to, but i need to get some of my other stories finished first :) really glad you liked the story so far! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [dudeyourwack] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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