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Review of chapter "Eleven" from brokenmimir
Review:
Buffy/Satsu is probably my favorite pairing, but there are only a handful of fics that feature it, and I treasure every one that does. I really hope you decide to update this again, because this is definitely one of the best of the lot. Kudos.
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eleven" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. Oh look, it seems Giles is in trouble again, at least it isn't Dawn. And Dawn should watch how much time she is spending with Willow, the babble is catchy.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eleven" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I was kind of lost for a little while because I'm not keeping up with the comics. Once you got back to S/B then I caught up. As normal for you, this was a really good chapter! You do a good writing understated emotion. You nail Buffy's fears and worries perfectly and you still keep her strong.

Nice story and I hope you update it soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eleven" from RebeccaAshling
Review:
I haven't read the "Twilight" arc yet but I imagine your story will go seriously AU in light of the revelation that XXXXX and YYYYY are both making an appearance in the comics.
Comments from author:
It already has started to veer a little. ;-) I'm still trying to work it out. There's a line of dialogue I've been wanting to write since *I* read the "Twilight" arc. and I have to figure out how to fit it.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eleven" from AmyK
Review:
Another great chapter to an already great story, I love it even though it had a cliffhanger ending, the characters continue to be amazingly written and I can't wait for another chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks. :-) And I didn't plan to end it on a cliffhanger, that's just the way the chapter went on me...
Review By [AmyK] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ten" from berndi
Review:
*sigh* Oh, this is the cutest thing I have ever read. Really. I get so emotionally involved with it, can feel the awkwardness or anxiousness or whatever it is you're trying to convey at any certain point, despite sometimes being a little disorientated with the dialogue. So, I'm really glad it's been revamped (lol, that's too old but I had to) and updated.

:D Looking forward to whatever may come
Review By [berndi] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ten" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
It was great to see a new chapter in this excellent story. I hope you have more planned.
Comments from author:
I do indeed. :-D
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ten" from RebeccaAshling
Review:
When I first read this story, I didn't entirely get it 'cause I hadn't read the Season Eight comics, didn't even know that there *were* Season Eight comics. I've since bought the first five collections so I now know what's going on. You've managed to skillfully weave an AU Buffy/Satsu romance into Season 8 without altering events too much otherwise which is kind of awesome. Look forward to your next update and it'll be interesting to see how you'll deal with the *SPOILER*
Comments from author:
I'm super glad you enjoy it. I love the comics, and weaving in and out of canon is my favorite thing, so that it works for you in that sense means a lot, thanks. :-)
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ten" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. I think it's now official that Buffy shouldn't spend anymore time with Willow. That was a Willow-worthy babblefest. Dawn's teasing of her sister was priceless as well.
Comments from author:
Heh, thanks, zig. :-) At first it was going to originally be Willow who came outside, but I couldn't make it work, then I thought of Dawn. And she just started speaking. Really foul. ;-)
Review By [zigpal] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ten" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Yeah! Hope to read more!


Thanks for the update
Comments from author:
Thank you for still reading. :-)
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ten" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
It's about time! LOL, glad Buffy got to tell Satsu she loved her. More please :)
Comments from author:
There will be. :-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ten" from gigi
Review:
Thanks for updating. I hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
You're welcome. Thanks for reading. :-)
Review By [gigi] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ten" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
That's our girl! Finally admitting love.
Comments from author:
:-)
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nine" from Amai
Review:
I absolutely love this story. Not only do you have your Buffy voice very much down (the good voice, not the later season I want to be dead voice) ....

--- “As long as it’s not math or math-related any at all, yes.” --- is so Buffy Buffy, that I kinda cried a little.

... you also are fleshing out the comics, in a happier, healthier kind of way that reminds me why I care so much about these characters (rather than the what are you doing now attitude I half have with the comics).

I really hope you continue this series because... it's....

*word fail*
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot. Sorry I took so long. Just getting back to this. :-)
Review By [Amai] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nine" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Love the story! Can't wait to see if Willow decides she's jealous and wants to take a crack at Buffy...lol. Please write more :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I did. More than a year later, but I did. Heh.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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