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Review of chapter "Highlights" from AllenPitt
Review:
Clearly, this is the Kinderstod's younger sister, out for revenge! Or maybe Warren with an early invisibility spell ... thing... ok, I've got no idea besides Marcie.
Comments from author:
Wait and see. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Highlights" from hand
Review:
I like the story and I think you write Veronica very well. My only comment is that VM didn't start using Frak until she went to Hearst and picked it up from someone in the dorm. If you are going to have her use it you should explain where she got it up from as I don't see her as a BSG fan.
Comments from author:
Thanks for catching that; I completely forgot it was outside this timeline, but at this point I'd just be retconning and I don't think it'd add enough to this story to fix it. I'll keep it in mind though. Thanks for the review!
Review By [hand] • Date [4 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Highlights" from batzulger
Review:
I really like the fact that Mars went to the Dale instead of the more typical 'Scooby goes to Neptune' fic. Seeing her reaction to all the typical Sunnydale weirdness is a large part of the charm. Great story, I'm loving it.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're liking it, and thanks for the review!
Review By [batzulger] • Date [3 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Some Sand" from AllenPitt
Review:
Couldn't willow magic up some electricity for the battery for the cell phone? Her & Tara could probably do something along those lines.
5 hours to the deadline, and Glory can probably find Dawn (make another giant snake thingy or something) Nice to see Riley doing something productive.
Glory and the boulder was a good idea. Though Buffy is a lot more durable than people expect--she took some hits from Glory who when she missed, would hit a concrete pillar & punch divots out of same......
Needs the troll hammer! Stat! ... And would it kill them to have called LA and gotten Angel's group to come over to help?
Comments from author:
Great ideas, as always, and thanks for reviewing!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Some Sand" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent story and I really think you've got Veronica's voice down near perfectly. I have to admit, you certainly seem to have painted Our Heroes into a corner. I can't wait to see how they save the world and Veronica gets paid. Or we all die horribly.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing! I hope they don't die horribly; plots aren't my forte. But no worries.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Some Sand" from Damia
Review:
Would you look at that!! I got a response to my last review AND a new chapter all in one morning. Be still my beating heart. The chapter was short, yes, however it was beyond wonderful to know that you are still out there and haven't forgotten about this wonderful fic. Can't wait for more,
- Damia
Comments from author:
I aim to please. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Damia] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Some Sand" from (Past Donor)Snag
Review:
Nice, nice. The Veronica voice could perhaps use just a shade of fine tuning, but only in turns of phrase and such. Dialog and behavior is doin' just fine.

Although I think I missed how Joyce managed to live, or did you just decide to go AU with this?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I'll look over this chapter again for the fine tuning; I'm sure that's something I could polish up with a read-through. I did get this chapter out a bit hastily. As for the AU-ness, yes, VM's arrival caused some divergence from canon. Glory found out about Dawn much quicker (details in my reply to TheatricalBarrister's review below), so the reason behind Joyce's illness has not yet been fully discovered.

Edit: I've made a bunch of phrase changes in the chapter now, hopefully for the better. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Some Sand" from Bkitty
Review:
Good fic. I'm really enjoying it. Veronica in the Scooby circle is just delicious.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it!
Review By [Bkitty] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Some Sand" from Bluedove
Review:
I love your Veronica voice.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bluedove] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Rock" from Damia
Review:
A rhyming a review does seem it a bit dandy
But I tend to like a bit of chocolate candy
This chapter made me quite the happy one
But I was depressed when I figured out it was done
So get on that keyboard and start to type
I'd like a new chapter by the end of tonight
Though I do understand if you can't go that quick
Sometimes it takes awhile for the words to stick
But know that I'm a fan of all that you do
And I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter from you

- Damia
Comments from author:
Ack! It's been a (long) while, but I can't believe I never replied to this. Thanks so much for your rhyming review! It was lovely. It's also quite a motivator, and it has been a crazy long stretch of hectic time, but I'll see what I can do about getting this fic going again. Thanks again for the review; I appreciate it! :)
Review By [Damia] • Date [24 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Rock" from Zombiegirl
Review:
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Buffy and Veronica are my favorite shows. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Zombiegirl] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Rock" from Bluedove
Review:
This is pretty good. I like the differences you're putting in now.
Comments from author:
Thanks, & thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [Bluedove] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hideout" from Takarameri
Review:
"Not to sound like some kind of newbie, but when I move to a new town, I generally don't like there to be a rampaging homeless God playing Kick-the-Town there already."

I love this line. Glad for the update. And it's one doozy of a cliff hanger. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! VM's lines are always a ton of fun to think up.
Review By [Takarameri] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hideout" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Hmm. I'm thinking--not terribly safe to take off in a helicopter right now. Glory might decide to lob the Winnebago at it.
Comments from author:
Lol! Must say I hadn't at all thought of that. Thanks for the review.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hideout" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [war] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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