Clearly, this is the Kinderstod's younger sister, out for revenge! Or maybe Warren with an early invisibility spell ... thing... ok, I've got no idea besides Marcie.

Wait and see. :) Thanks for reviewing.

I like the story and I think you write Veronica very well. My only comment is that VM didn't start using Frak until she went to Hearst and picked it up from someone in the dorm. If you are going to have her use it you should explain where she got it up from as I don't see her as a BSG fan.

Thanks for catching that; I completely forgot it was outside this timeline, but at this point I'd just be retconning and I don't think it'd add enough to this story to fix it. I'll keep it in mind though. Thanks for the review!

I really like the fact that Mars went to the Dale instead of the more typical 'Scooby goes to Neptune' fic. Seeing her reaction to all the typical Sunnydale weirdness is a large part of the charm. Great story, I'm loving it.

I'm glad you're liking it, and thanks for the review!

Couldn't willow magic up some electricity for the battery for the cell phone? Her & Tara could probably do something along those lines.
5 hours to the deadline, and Glory can probably find Dawn (make another giant snake thingy or something) Nice to see Riley doing something productive.
Glory and the boulder was a good idea. Though Buffy is a lot more durable than people expect--she took some hits from Glory who when she missed, would hit a concrete pillar & punch divots out of same......
Needs the troll hammer! Stat! ... And would it kill them to have called LA and gotten Angel's group to come over to help?

Great ideas, as always, and thanks for reviewing!

Excellent story and I really think you've got Veronica's voice down near perfectly. I have to admit, you certainly seem to have painted Our Heroes into a corner. I can't wait to see how they save the world and Veronica gets paid. Or we all die horribly.

Thanks for reviewing! I hope they don't die horribly; plots aren't my forte. But no worries.

Would you look at that!! I got a response to my last review AND a new chapter all in one morning. Be still my beating heart. The chapter was short, yes, however it was beyond wonderful to know that you are still out there and haven't forgotten about this wonderful fic. Can't wait for more,
- Damia

I aim to please. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Nice, nice. The Veronica voice could perhaps use just a shade of fine tuning, but only in turns of phrase and such. Dialog and behavior is doin' just fine.

Although I think I missed how Joyce managed to live, or did you just decide to go AU with this?

Thanks for the review! I'll look over this chapter again for the fine tuning; I'm sure that's something I could polish up with a read-through. I did get this chapter out a bit hastily. As for the AU-ness, yes, VM's arrival caused some divergence from canon. Glory found out about Dawn much quicker (details in my reply to TheatricalBarrister's review below), so the reason behind Joyce's illness has not yet been fully discovered.

Edit: I've made a bunch of phrase changes in the chapter now, hopefully for the better. :)

Good fic. I'm really enjoying it. Veronica in the Scooby circle is just delicious.

Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it!

I love your Veronica voice.

Thank you!

A rhyming a review does seem it a bit dandy
But I tend to like a bit of chocolate candy
This chapter made me quite the happy one
But I was depressed when I figured out it was done
So get on that keyboard and start to type
I'd like a new chapter by the end of tonight
Though I do understand if you can't go that quick
Sometimes it takes awhile for the words to stick
But know that I'm a fan of all that you do
And I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter from you

- Damia

Ack! It's been a (long) while, but I can't believe I never replied to this. Thanks so much for your rhyming review! It was lovely. It's also quite a motivator, and it has been a crazy long stretch of hectic time, but I'll see what I can do about getting this fic going again. Thanks again for the review; I appreciate it! :)

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Buffy and Veronica are my favorite shows. Looking forward to more.

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

This is pretty good. I like the differences you're putting in now.

Thanks, & thank you for taking the time to review!

"Not to sound like some kind of newbie, but when I move to a new town, I generally don't like there to be a rampaging homeless God playing Kick-the-Town there already."

I love this line. Glad for the update. And it's one doozy of a cliff hanger. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Thanks for the review! VM's lines are always a ton of fun to think up.

Hmm. I'm thinking--not terribly safe to take off in a helicopter right now. Glory might decide to lob the Winnebago at it.

Lol! Must say I hadn't at all thought of that. Thanks for the review.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.

Thanks!