This is a wonderful chapter. I have to wonder what it was that Snape took (borrowed) from Willow. I really love how they are comparing spells, that is really really cool. I am really glad that Willow healed Snape, I am also glad that she let the subject of his dark mark drop, right now she really doesn't NEED to know about it. As always I eagerly await the next installment of this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm so glad to see this again. I enjoy the fight between Snape and Willow. It was very entertaining. The imagery of the fight was very vivid. Both of their styles of casting was both dramatic and flashy with Willow's crackling lighting and flowing hair and Snape's wielding his wand like sword. This was the best magical fight scene I ever read.
Review By [angelaask] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review By [leelaa] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Keshkreature
Review:
I love it! Thanks so much for the quick update! Your Snape-Willow intractions seem perfectly in character for this stage in their relationship, and they're an absolute delight. I can't wait to see what page Snape grabbed though! I'm going to be itching with curiosity to see what he felt he not only had to take, but then hide, until you post the next installment!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
ooohh i LOVE the scenes between the two of them. snape with pink hair about sent me to the floor howling. is she really going to do that some time? she should when he ticks her off too badly. heh. *hands you scones*
Another excellent chapter. You capture the characters really well.
I'm interested to see both what Snape took and whether Willow would be able to unravel the dark mark in the same way she did his paralysis, although understandably with a lot more difficulty.
Well done and thanks for sharing, I look forward to seeing more of this one.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Not Rated
ah, amazing chapter! great dynamics between willow and snape. Can't wait for each of them to find out more about the other's dark and sordid past! should make for some good drama.
great work!
Review By [yakoba] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I agree with KzintiKiller and Luna. Excellent work. Characterizations, 'voices', humour...all highly enjoyable.
Also fully appreciated the descriptions of Willow's experiences with 'Wizarding' transportation methods and her interactions with the school wards.
Throughout the dual in chapter 10 I was wondering what happened to the projector and the transparencies on which Willow had worked so long. Snape sucker-punched her while they were having a conversation in their own classroom. Hopefully that will teach Willow just how sneaky he can be. Though it does Look like it got her engine revving a bit.
Really hope you'll restart updating regularly.
Review By [draconis] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Undeniably the most entertaining HP/BtVS cross since "A Drop in the Ocean". I love it. The characters are dead on, though Hermione was a bit more pedantic than I'd expect. Aside from that you're firing on all cylinders. Watching this story develop should be fun. Especially as the wand wavers come to grips with the fact that the they're only big fish in the little bitty pond that their ancestors set up for them long ago.
KK
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]