Yay! You updated! :D Just for that you get a 10. Loved the chapter. And wondering what chaos will cause Dawn (or the Scoobies if they go to that dimension).
Now that I think of it, Tenten would get along with the slayers. They all have the same obsession with weapons.
Comments from author:
Very true. It's like this instictive, I see pointy shiny object, I must have ponty shiny object! Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [bellec] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
The second i clicked to track your story you updated lol! (After almost 14 months) Awesome timing :D, i really hope you update again soon i think the story is turning out really well.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm not sure how long it'll take me to get a new chapter out, but I'll try to make it sooner rather than latter.
Review By [rhiowen] • Date [12 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Hope to read more of this story soon. You did a good job on the chapter, except I think you could have made it longer. Do you know when you might be adding more?
Comments from author:
Sorry to take so long to respond, I'm afraid I must have missed the review notification email! I'll try to update but I've been pretty busy lately. Thanks for the feedback, I can definitely try to go back and add a bit more to the chapter(s), it just matters when I get around to it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Lol! You would have trouble being able to see this particular episode since, at least in the show, it hasn't happened yet... or hadn't as of two months ago, I have yet to see more since. I'm still in the filler parts. In the manga, though, and to make it short, he was killed by Akatsuki's Hidan (some sort of immortal freak) who was taken out (though not killed) by Shikamaru while Naruto took out his partner Kakuzu.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I rather prefer the anime, but I may read the manga. Thanks for the review!!
It's hitai-ate. And a very good point for you asking whether or not you got it right. Make that another good point, because so far your story's not only good, it is very consistant.
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! I haven't had much of a chance to update, what with being gone most the summer, and now school starting again, but for that one comment I shall try!!!
Things are getting interesting! By the way, the story is set before or after Sai appearance? Is Orochimaru still alive? o.o?
Comments from author:
Yes, Orochimaru is still alive (if he wasn't my entire plot would be messed up)!! I haven't seen much of the shippuden (though I probably should, since I'm writing in that timeline) so I'm not sure how badly I'm messing up the timeline. Yes to Sai being there, but I don't think he'll have much of a part in the story. Thanks for the review!!!!
Ino and Chouji have change their attitude, maybe their are following Asuma last wishes. but the way you described Ino made me think of Buffy when she was a newbie slayer. and about her nails still intact .... its sooo Buffy, don't you think?
Comparing Lee with Andrew?? hahaha ... I agree with that ... Youth and the Force .... hahahaha and I think Dawn will make another comparison for other people to.
Comments from author:
I never much thought about Buffy vs. Ino, but I totally agree!! Kind've the whole...denying what they got themselves into (or where thrown into by the PTB's) by trying to continue their normal lives. Thanks for the review!!!
Review By [Rossell] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
good, your dawn can really relate to Naruto... I wonder if the deamons would recognize her as the Key or even know what it is...
Comments from author:
Thanks!! I hadn't thought of demons recognizing her, I'll definently think about it, but I'm not sure if I want to uncover her keyness anytime soon!! Thanks for the review!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Okay, I already posted a review for this chapter, but my memory is very bad and I forgot to ask something: (takes air) Are there going to be any pairings? ^o^
Comments from author:
I have no idea. There may be some side pairings, but I haven't found a pairing I like for Dawn yet. Thanks for the review!!
It's getting better with each chapter!!! I really like it.
So Dawn is thinking about telling Tsunade about vampires and slayers(and demons)? I can't wait to read that part:
Dawn: ..... and that's the story! So, if an army of young women with pointy and shining things comes knocking to the village...mmm....well, let's just say it's best you don't attack them.
By the way, you should made the chapters a bit longer....or try to put two chapters in one ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks!! I'll try to make them longer, but I tend to stop writing if I wait too long between updates.
