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Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from LegacyWeapon
Review:
Very cute spoof you have here. I don't really know what else to say other than while this may have been a tad heavy-handed, it really does feel like 'Buffy/Stargate Fanfics: The Abridged Series.' And I do mean that as a compliment.

Thank you for this. Now I just need to get over the image of the rib cage on Buffy's head so that I can get some food into my stomach to start the day right. ^_^
Comments from author:
Yeah, it was heavy handed. When I wrote this, I had just gotten through no less than six Buffy/Stargate crossovers in a row that all followed the same basic outline. At the time, I was extremely annoyed by that one scene that always seemed to show up in every Buffy/Stargate crossovers: Whistler Explains it All.

Since then, I've debated writing a story entitled 'Whistler Explains it All.' The broad outline: Whistler's got an ongoing competition going with some of his coworkers to see who can get a crossover group to believe the biggest, most outrageous lies. Stuff like, "Yeah. You're the reincarnation of King Arthur, kid. He's Guenivere, and she's Lancelot. Sorry to have to tell you like this."
Review By [LegacyWeapon] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from MAIMS
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Sooo true. I mean, Buffy would never trust these secret government people who are rather too much like the Initiative for comfort, and they would never trust a bunch of unknown kids with national secrets.
Review By [MAIMS] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from PrincessAudrii
Review:
Having the flu, I read this on NyQuil!
Yet it still made sense and was sadly so true and funny too.
Now if I can Supernatural sequel in the same vein I can die happy.
Review By [PrincessAudrii] • Date [13 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from KindredsHeart
Review:
For being as corny and "badfic" as what this is, i think this has to be by far one of my favorite comic stories.... please try and do another one but with maybe House or NCIS or CSI.... would love to see how that would turn out..

KH
Review By [KindredsHeart] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from Shadewolf
Review:
-_-

Ummmm...

You're right. Stargate fics should not be written like that.
Review By [Shadewolf] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from ecifrog
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I just had stitches done in my mouth this morning duo to pulling a tooth, so.... Must... not.... laugh... Must... not... laugh...... hurts..... Damn you for making me laugh....
Review By [ecifrog] • Date [23 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from phlogistics
Review:
Your representation of the Buffy/Stargate badfic is spot on. Your characterization was beautifully horrendous, with random monkey sex and just enough Jack pimpage to make me want to shoot myself.

Brilliant. Someone really needed to point out how terrible some fiction has gotten, and you did a great job of it.
Review By [phlogistics] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from anouk
Review:
This is so true! :D *sigh* I especially hate the insta-sharing-of-deepest-darkest-secrets.
Review By [anouk] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from Orion
Review:
This is one of those things that I read then just sorta shake my head as sigh. The 'Indeed' has to be in my top ten list of 'best place for him to say that'.

Worth the short time it took to read.
Review By [Orion] • Date [21 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from amusewithaview
Review:
The end was my favorite.

"No sex unless it's with me!"

^_^

Jinkies!
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from utilitariancaramel
Review:
You are my favorite person.
Review By [utilitariancaramel] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from Amai
Review:
Oh Great Googly Goddess, I nearly died. I think I choked a little laughing. The saddest part is how amazingly true it is. And how pretty much any SG cross I've ever written has at least one of those. I'm still laughing. My dog thinks I'm a basket case. Thank you so much for putting this up.

*breaths. drops the floor and rolls around in hysterics*
Review By [Amai] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from ShayneT
Review:
I have to admit that I hate the ribcage hat thing. I pretty much hate it anytime Whistler appears because usually it's just a way for the writer to say "Screw all the prep work. We'll just rush ahead to the good stuff."

Unfortunately, without the prep work, the good stuff is rarely that great.

This story is fun and sadly true.
Review By [ShayneT] • Date [30 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from callhervera
Review:
I have been using this as a guide while writing my first stargate crossover fic. I'm particularly proud that I haven't once used the word 'indeed' lol. Keep up the good/great/fantastic/totally awesome work.

My personal highlight - the ribcage hat. It annoys me every time someone mentions it, so I couldn't help but LMAO with what you wrote!
Review By [callhervera] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Lovely Bunch of Coconuts" from Keshkreature
Review:
lol, so true. I think you use better adjectives than they do though =)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [4 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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