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Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from bradsan
Review:
What happen, why did you stop this story. It was a really good start and deserves updates. So Buffy and Willow are Immortal. If I understand it wright. I hope that one day you think I'm gone finish this story. I hope that one day is coming sooner than later.

Again good start.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from FireWolfe
Review:
Update pretty please this sounds really good.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from FireWolfe
Review:
Update pretty please this sounds really good.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from Moonlost
Review:
The storyline is great. Please continue.
Review By [Moonlost] • Date [28 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from DarkRose
Review:
I beg you to continue i would love to read more please.

hugs and smiles xoxoxo
Review By [DarkRose] • Date [26 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
please continue.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from EmmaLove
Review:
I admit that I'm like one of your previous reviewers - I do love the Xan-Man, and admit that I personally would have come up with a way for him to be included, but that's me, not you. So, not really complaining or insisting you insert him, I mean I'd rather have Xander left out if there isn't a place for him - though admittedly I will miss him. (B/W/X OT3 and all)

Anyway, I do like this fanfic, and I think you have a killer start here. I'm on a kick myself (at the moment) with making characters immortal as well as visiting the past with them. So, it is nice to others are playing with that too.

Also (finally), if you still haven't found a beta reader, I'd be willing to do my best. However, I should point out that because I'm currently working on a long series - eleven parts, and I'm only just into Part Three - I might not be able to work on your story as fast as you'd like for me to. Admittedly I would do my best to get things back to you in a timely fashion, but since I'm heavily into my own fanfic, I obviously can't promise fast turn-around every time. So I would understand if you wanted to get someone else, if you don't all ready have someone else - just thought I'd offer in case you hadn't all ready found someone else.

Another potential downside is that I stopped reading Anita after "Incubus Dreams." Well, I stopped after "DM," but I can't actually remember much about "DM." And, to be honest, I really loathed "Incubus Dreams," still I do know lots of Anita canon, but freely admit that there is a cut-off point to my knowledge. Still I could totally help you with the names of Anita characters as well as places of Anita.

Anyway, I hope to see this fanfic continue with or without me as a beta reader. ;)
Review By [EmmaLove] • Date [22 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from Dawnlady
Review:
and again, please get a beta, even if it is a new one every few chapters
you switch between using Jean-Claude and Jean Claude
and I am pretty sure you are trying to portrait Buffy as bored not board ... well you use it consistently so you might mean board, but then you definitely lost me - cause I don't know what you could mean with that
and this does not make much sense as a sentence :"the blood Saint Louis Triumvirate"
the blood of the members of the St.Louis Triumvirate ...

sorry to be so picky, but I quite like your storyidea, but the dire need of a beta will keep the numbers of readers down
I am German and I have to find new betas every now and then, too, because beta'ing my stories so isn't easy,
Review By [Dawnlady] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from gigi
Review:
Nice chapter. You kept spelling bored wrong though. Please update soon.
Review By [gigi] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from Chan
Review:
Boy all the forces are slowly gathering, making for a really tense sort thing that sounds as though they're going to put a major hurting on St. Louis. Aside from the potential hellmouth & what not.
Comments from author:
And why did you assume it would be a Hellmouth? Honestly, that's what I thought everyone would assume, but you know what they say about assumtions.
Review By [Chan] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CONSEQUENCES OF ACTIONS AND STORY TIME" from AllenPitt
Review:
Belle won't think to do it, but in this USA vampires can't be killed without a court order ---so she could just call RPIT & get B/W in a lot of trouble.....
Comments from author:
So true. But that would ruin all the fun, now wouldn't it? But still...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good Start. One note though, its "Belle Morte" If you need any help spelling names Wikipedia is fantastic.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yamitenshi
Review:
It sounds interesting and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. However, if Buffy and Willow are planning on killing Belle Morte, then Asher and everyone else who has Belle Morte as their sire would die. Wicked and Truth were an exception and very unusual in the fact that they lived after their sire was killed.
Review By [yamitenshi] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rissah
Review:
It's moving a bit fast, almost like there's already too much going on in the first chapter. I might have suggested fleshing out the latter piece a bit more. Regardless, sounds like the bunny trail on this story will be fun to follow. I look forward to your future chapters.
Comments from author:
Well I hope it will be fun. Thanks for thinking so though.
Review By [Rissah] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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