Great chapter! I agree with the previous reviewer that we need a bit of backstory about the QAF characters and what/how they know about magic. I'm pretty sure that Tucker was in the same age as the Scoobies - they had the same Prom, right? So Andrew would be a year or two beneath them.
Warren is such an asshole. I hope he eventually gets what's coming to him! Poor Andrew!

Hmm, bit more exposition needed on who in Pittsburgh knows what about magic.

Jonathon met Warren in group therapy? Cool. Is he the one who gave him the Superstar spell?

Hmm... Chapter Six still in Season 4? I'm kinda confused on when Jonathon left Sunnydale and how long its been since then, Season-wise. Interesting touch having magic be the Wells family business.

Cool so far.

I posted a Jonathon/Michael FFA last year, still open if you want to take it :)

I'm thinking that as Jonathan attempted suicide in season 1, and that group therapy would have been at least until May, he would have graduated in Season 3, with the Scooby Gang. Andrew would have been at least a year behind; do you remember what year Tucker was in? And my memory is that Warren was a year above the Scooby Gang; I'm still trying to figure out the when this took place. But presumably this is early season 4, as Ethan was taken by the Initiative in Season 4.
Any other input?

Oh it's great.

I'm so invested in this story, you have no idea.

I'm recovering from invasive hand surgery, in maybe a week, there'll be another chapter up.

o kay now the story makes sence for me, but in a really sad way, but thats good I like it

the way you discripe the realationship between warren, andrew and jonathan brings a little tear in my eye and the wish to castrade this bastard warren

hope brian, michael and emmett can help jonathan

Nane

I'm not so shure what to make of the story so far, but it's interesting so I'm waiting for the next chapter *G*

Nane

I flailed spastically when I read this. I love it!