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Review of chapter "Lazerine Condition" from manic
Yay! Michael gets another chance! And he's not burdened with his bitterness and hatred.
Review By [manic] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lazerine Condition" from (Current Donor)Sulien
*blinks and checks author list to see if there's another Sulien* *blushes furiously* Thank you very muchly for giving Michael that middle name! *grins hugely*

I have to say, you gave me the shaking heebie jeebies with all that about spinal taps, as they're called in the US. I have a REALLY bad phobia of needles. *wipes sweat from palms...again* I feel so bad for your friend having to go through all of that, I can't even imagine the pain of having to have that needle dug out, not to mention the headache worse than a migraine that would have resulted. *shudders again*

As for the rest of this chapter, I love all you said about the philosophical and ethical implications of the tampering done in "Michael", "Allies" and "No Man's Land". I find it poetically ironic that Michael is majoring in Philosophy and I can just imagine what he'll have to say in his classes dealing with ethics, especially medical ethics.

I may be risking a trip to the vet's office here, but I really hope that you plan to add more chapters to "Lazarine Condition", because this was a fantastic beginning to what could be a truly great story. More, pretty please? With the good chocolate on top?
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lazerine Condition" from (Recent Donor)LordMesron
I am really enjoying this series. Were you planning to use Xander in a future story? I only ask as you brought him to Atlantis at the end of Usual Suspects, but I did not see him in Lazerine Condition.
Review By [(Recent Donor)LordMesron] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lazerine Condition" from link
I like it when Michael majoring in philosophy. Very appropriate :)
Review By [link] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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