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Review of chapter "Coming Home" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I found this story... interesting. I tend to enjoy stories where we have to deal with a world without Buffy, and I certainly think you did a good job just dropping us right into this world and NOT telling us everything that happened in the past. I personally can't do that -- I always have to go back and explain things because I want readers to know what I know.

However, I do think there was almost TOO much going on, family-wise. It seemed like the Potters were related to everyone, and the kids had about a zillion aunts and uncles. Severus being "Uncle Sev", I think, was the straw that broke the camel's back. And Harry and Buffy had WAY too many children.

Overall, though, I did like the story and I feel relatively satisfied by the ending, although the last bit -- talking about another potential sibling -- was a bit over-the-top.

I look forward to what comes next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. The Potters are not related to all these people. The titles of Uncle and Aunt are just used as honorifics. The children have only one true aunt- Dawn. Sorry for the confusion.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Loved that last bit about always getting a new sibling after one of these experiences. It's like the baby boom phenomenon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed that last bit.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Search of the Lost Charge" from joshlamont
Review:
Well, now. That's quite a backstory this fanfic has! I'm intrigued and wondering if you'll be writing a prequel once this is all over.
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going to a Party" from mwinter
Review:
Good chapter. Waiting on the next.
Review By [mwinter] • Date [26 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Someone to Watch Over Me" from FireWolfe
Review:
Nicely done I would love to see more.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Someone to Watch Over Me" from MinnietheMouse
Review:
Another great chapter. But who is this phony watcher? I love that Abby is a slayer, and I'm looking forward to seeing Harry's reaction to it. Bring Buffy back soon!
Review By [MinnietheMouse] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Harry was about to reply back when Severus weighed in.” Potter, Malfoy, need I remind you that you are both teachers now. Please try to act the part.”

--> I liked that line; I could definitely see that happening.

Of course Dawn would fall for the bad boy *rolls eyes & smiles*

Only suggestion: Its tricky switching timelines & perspectives, maybe you could make it more pronounced with italics or separating it with a border line? That would make it easier to read.

Interested to see where this goes
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [21 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I am intruiged! And confused! So Narcissa is the grandmother... meaning Buffy married Draco?? But wait... That doesn't make sense if Hermione is the boy's dad's best bud... So she married Harry... but Narcissa?

Huh. I shall continue to read!
Comments from author:
Narcissa is the Grandmother by relationship rather than blood. It was a relationship that developed through Narcissa's friendship with Buffy. Since there is no living blood grandmother, Narcissa stepped into that role.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophecies, Hospitals and Deep, Dark Rituals" from Sayko
Review:
I love your story, i read it a month ago or so, so i canot say what exactly i like. But! I do love this story, its charming, it has wits and drama and all the big words for those stories.

Really would like to know how it ends, how much will be revealed about buffy and her life and how much this affects her family.
So thrilling!

Greets Wermops
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. I know I haven't updated in a while, but I am working on the next chapter and it should be up soon.
Review By [Sayko] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prophecies, Hospitals and Deep, Dark Rituals" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice story so far and I lookforwad to read more of it and I don't think his oldest will sit around and wait :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monster Aunts" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Glad to see an update! Can't wait for more :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monster Aunts" from spring
Review:
I still say Buffy is alive. I love this chapter, thanks for updating this by the way. I eagerly await the next installment of this wonderful story.
Review By [spring] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11- Paris" from AnneTicTac
Review:
Hey there!
I don't know why but today I remembered you had writen this and I had a sudden urge to see if maybe you had updated and for some reason the tracking was not working. No such luck!
Anyway I wanted you to remember you left us hanging here! There are many things waiting to happen and I can't wait for you to update soon!
It's a great fic !
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. I am still working on this fic and should have something posted soon. Sorry for the delay but the story changed as the characters demanded. So I had to rewrite major sections of the story.
Review By [AnneTicTac] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11- Paris" from spring
Review:
This is a wonderful chapter. I think that Padma is overreacting about the twins wanting to sleep in the same bed as Harry, it only makes since they recently lost Buffy (or so everyone thinks) and they were recently attacked by monsters. If i were in that position oh yeah you can grantee that I would be in the same bed as any surviving parent. I hope that Harry's two oldest soon quit trying to resurrect Buffy and realize that this is a road that should never be taken no matter how much you miss someone. More soon of this wonderful fic please.
Review By [spring] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11- Paris" from Kristal
Review:
So I found this story and am in love with it! Its sad but amazing! I hope to read more glimpses of Harry and Buffy or Buffy and the kiddies! Continue ASAP! Write now!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. As for writing, I'll try to get the next chapter up faster than the last one, but no guarantees.
Review By [Kristal] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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