Wonderful story. I love Faith stories and this was a good one. Sigh. If only the series could have given the Chosen Two the relationship you show them developing.
Comments from author:
thank you very much! i agree with you completely. I wish that they had... i was so unsatisfied with the way they handled things with the girls. i actually have a sequel to this story that I have posted on a different website. if you would like to read it i would love for you to. here is the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4102791&chapter=1.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Not Rated
This is a really sweet story; please keep it up. I'm excited to read some more.
Random request - even if this is non-AU/supposed to return to the original storyline - leave us in the final chapter on an upbeat, please. I wouldn't even mention it, but I've been scarred by one too many Buffy/Faith stories that ended something like: "... and that's why they hated one another forever, even though they were so close to something else." If it isn't AU, let the final return to hating happen off-screen, since your story will probably get me emotionally committed to the relationship.
Anyway, enjoying it. Thanks.
Comments from author:
No, no hating... thank you for reading! i have finished the story and am in the process of writing a sequel if you are interested
Review By [solidstate] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
I am liking this story and looking forward to reading more of it. It is rare after so long to find a good Faith/Buffy story that builds the tension up instead of the author just telling us that it was already there.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I have posted the last part if you would like to read, and a sequel is in process.
Review By [Jess] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]