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Review of chapter ""B" Is For Babbbling" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
I like the concept. You could use captive for 'C' since Harry and Xander keep getting kidnapped. Good luck with the inspiration! Been there (still am, dang it!) and know it can be like a physical pain sometimes.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""B" Is For Babbbling" from Elleria
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Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [21 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""B" Is For Babbbling" from MichelleWinchester
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It's kind of cool how you've got your story. And the way it flows, I never would have noticed it if you hadn't of pointed it out. I totally never would be able to do it! :)
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""B" Is For Babbbling" from link
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I can only imagine the 'fun' these two will encounter. If only Dawn was added to the mix, it will become more 'fun'. Keep writing. Love to read what these boys will be up to.
Review By [link] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""B" Is For Babbbling" from Lin
Review:
Very amusing, i bet you are having fun writing this!
Review By [Lin] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""B" Is For Babbbling" from Sadfru
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Your screwed when you get to the X, Y and Z's :)
Comments from author:
Believe me, I know. I'm part Slytherin, though; I can easily traverse rules created for the unimaginative(i.e. I cheat).
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""B" Is For Babbbling" from Tanydwr
Review:
Great.

As a thought though, if you want more 'B' British expletives than Blimey (which you use five times!), you might try Blast or Bollocks. (Not bullocks, bullocks are something quite different.)

Keep up the good work.

Lol, Tanydwr
Comments from author:
OH! Oh, thanks! You have no idea how helpful that is!
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""B" Is For Babbbling" from Micah
Review:
Nice start, but maybe the chapter shoulda been "'B' is for Blimey". Seriously, we get Harry's British, no need to throw that into every sentence.
Comments from author:
LOL! I know I used that word a lot, but it's the only Britishism I know that would have fit there other than 'bugger'. I don't especially like that word, so...
Review By [Micah] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""A" Is For Apparating" from (Past Donor)LisaF
Review:
I really liked the plot of this one, but every sentence starting with "A" got very tired, very quickly. I think this might work for an interesting writing exercise, but not for very readable stories.
Comments from author:
I definitely agree. The problem for me is that my creativity is starting to run dry, and I'm finding it difficult to update on many of my stories. This exercise, then, is really like a handicap, to force me to work harder to get the results that I want. I do this sort of thing rather often, and it helps me go back to the basics.
Review By [(Past Donor)LisaF] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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