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Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from angryteabag
Amazing. A favourite ship of mine and it was dirty and delightful. I hope this isn't your only W/W story xxx
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it ::grins:: We have one other one!
Review By [angryteabag] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from (Recent Donor)Luna
This was great!! Loved the pairing.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked this unusual pairing. Thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Sweet and hot as you usually are. Pluses for doing a Willow and Wesley combo. It's far too rare.


Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch ::grins:: And yeah, they're a pretty rare pair. *Hugs*
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from Alkeni
Comments from author:
Who knew these two could be smoking hot, huh? LOL
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from TheatricalBarrister
Yes, I did like the change of tone. I was hoping they'd get together in a more ... healthy ... relationship as the story progressed.

I particularly enjoyed the thought of Lorne critiquing the porn movie. I can just picture him sitting there, sea breeze in hand, saying "No, that's not how it's done. And would you look at how bored she is!" I just had the wicked thought, if he can read souls while people sing, imagine what he'd come up with when they ... arrived, as it were.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you didn't find the change of tone jarring. I figure they can have it all... hot and sweet, why not!

Lorne mind reading... that WOULD be wicked! Willow's skin tone would match her hair, that's for sure, lol.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from meka
Want to know how you can tell that a story is written very well? When you are so engrossed by the characters and the moment that when they get "caught" during a private moment the reader (me) actually blushes on their behalf. I actually covered my eyes because hoping that I misread it for a moment. LOL.
Great story. Worked fine for me.

Best wishes,
Comments from author:
Well now, you've made my day for sure, lol I love getting that engrossed in a story, so thank you very much for letting me know it happened to you here. *hugs* and thank you for your lovely comments.
Review By [meka] • Date [3 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 5" from Scrappychic
I love this story. The last chapter definitely changed the tone of the story. It went from nearly PWP to a Romance... but somehow it still works. I loved it.
And Wesley's "It was a trick" thing was hilarious.

The only thing I would have put in this last chapter was one of them quoting something from the Princess Bride... the Wesley/Westley name thing always convinced me that any romance involving Wes should have a quote from the Princess Bride in it. lol... but then, that's just my inner geek showing through here.

I can think of several that might have worked somewhere in this last chapter.
-"As you wish.”
-"This is True Love... you think this happens every day?"
-"Since the invention of the kiss, there have only been five kisses that were rated the most passionate, the most pure. This one left them all behind.”
-"Mawwage is what bwings us togwether today....”
-"I'm not a Witch; I'm your wife.”

But, whether or not the (in my mind) obligatory Princess Bride quote was included, it's still a great read, and definitely drool worthy.

Great Job!
Comments from author:
Well I'm thrilled you liked it. The tone change was worrying, in a short span of time, so glad to hear it worked for you ::grins::

Princess Bride is one of my all time faves! Wish I'd thought of it, lol Actually, it was also my first fanfiction... a twisted version, but yup... that's how I got my feet wet.

And a bit of trivia, my co author had her hubby's wedding ring engraved with "as you wish" - thought you might like that, lol
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [3 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 4" from meka
Review: You write very well. That could not have been easy to pull off. Great writing, great story.

Comments from author:
Thank you muchly, your comments are much appreciated :)
Review By [meka] • Date [2 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 4" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Wow! Not something I should have been reading at work...
Comments from author:
ROFLMAO... there's no arguing with that :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch. 3" from Eve
I am loving this. After reading the first two chapters I immediately went to find more willow/wesley pairings. But none of them have been this good. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Comments from author:
Woot, that is very nice to hear. Thank you muchly :) I know there is quite a bit of Spillow out there, but hardly any Weslow I think. Kinda sorta rectifying it, lol
Review By [Eve] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 2" from irialonso
You really know how to write good smut!:)

Really like the story, you have to continue it
Comments from author:
Wonderful to hear the pairing and the story is working for you. Thank you for letting us know :)
Review By [irialonso] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 2" from GeekGoddess
I loved this pairing...even before the actors were a real couple. Please continue it. Your story is fantastic.
Comments from author:
It's kind of weird they are a couple... and we're writing about the characters they played, lol. Glad you're enjoying it :)
Review By [GeekGoddess] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 2" from chajalive
A wonderful pairing. Two highly intelligent and slightly repressed characters getting it on. how wonderful!
Comments from author:
Woot, glad you like the story. Funny huh, the combination of intelligent/repressed/and yet trying out their kinks characters? I never thought of it that way, no wonder they fit together :)
Review By [chajalive] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 2" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
I love it.

Wesley/Willow isn't one I've read before, but it has interested me enough that I thought about it. Good job so far. I always liked scruffy dnagerous Wes vs. Buffy Wes
Comments from author:
Ah, new pairing for you, huh? Woot, glad you decided to try it, then. I agree, wussy Wes from Buffy is boring, but dangerous/mysterious Wes from Angel rocks. Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 2" from meka
Not a popular pairing currently, but I have read many a W/W pairing in the past and this is turning out to be one of the best. Hope this develops into more then sex. Hope for more soon.

Comments from author:
It's wonderful to hear you are enjoying this story that much. Interesting that you want it to develop into more than sex, while another reader feels a bit cheated by the fact the story appears to be going that way (toward a relationship) when the vehicle for the characters to meet (the website) appears to promise a lack of a monogamous relationship. This is why I love comments, you get to look at the same story from many angles and view points. This one will move toward a relationship :)

Thank you for commenting.
Review By [meka] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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