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The Endless War

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Review of chapter "The Endless War" from Ansku
Review:
Nice
Review By [Ansku] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Endless War" from CadyNicole
Review:
An interesting idea, one that could go far, but the way it is written right now makes it very, tedious is a good word, to read. The concept of the situation that you have put Xander and Oz in is very orignial, but the format is very 'they did this, and then they did this, and then they did this', and that tends to get boring after a while. Your chracterization is also off, and while that is sometimes a good thing, in this it comes off as slightly annoying. This would probably do better if it was expanded upon and turned into a novel length fiction, not just one long chapter with everything slammed together.

Slytherin
Review By [CadyNicole] • Date [21 Sep 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Endless War" from Inquisitor
Review:
not bad but i think u missed out on Cordelia...remember at the time, Xander&Cordelia made peace with each other unless Cordy got killed by Angelus...also i'm surprised that Angelus didn't even tried to turn some of their friends into vamps...i'm sure Xander would want to stake Harmony just on principle...
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Endless War" from TimeTwist
Review:
Not bad, but it could use a quite a bit of tweaking. The main problem I see is that the characters are way out of character. Specifically Methos. For one he didn't survive for 5000 years by telling everyone he met his name the moment he first met them. Second he is a manipulative survivor at heart, more inclined to hide rather than fight. When he does help people it rarely out of the goodness of his heart, but rather he is coerced or does so out of survival not valor. The Methos in this story, just didn't have that feel to him. The Slayer's Watchers also would more likely have tried to kill Xander with extreme prejudice rather than agree to join him so easily. Hopefully that should give you a good start.
Review By [TimeTwist] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Endless War" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Pretty good.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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