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Review of chapter "The Mission was to Protect..." from spacey
Review:
how odd, and how right, that dawn should lead the slayers
Review By [spacey] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from BillieBog
Review:
Just found this and it is great. Hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review!
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mission was to Protect..." from wyvernwolf
Review:
That was so twisted and great! That Dawn was the one who was there for Cameron when she was first 'born' is a great idea. It made me wonder whether she somehow knew what would happen in the future/past...and that idea really hurts my brain.
Comments from author:
*beams* Thank you! Yeah, don't think too much about the whole present/past/future thing. It will make your brain implode. Not good.

But yes, Dawn is very involved with the construction of Cameron in this verse.
Review By [wyvernwolf] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mission was to Protect..." from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
*flailing

Boo at Derek. Yay for Cameron.

*sigh

Lovely
Comments from author:
*grins* Thanks for the review honey!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
you did put a warning in the disclaimer, but the events that transpired made me feel a wee bit sad, which shows good writing on your part
Comments from author:
Yeah, I wasn't too happy with my muse for killing Buffy, but it just happened.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mission was to Protect..." from SpinelessPunster
Review:
You've captured the sick irony of T:tSCC very well.

I'll go out on a limb, adn say that Dawn is even less fond of guns now.

First Tara, then Buffy (again).

Probably not fond of Derek, either.

Good job with emoting a terminator, and good verisimilitude towards the x-over.

2 tough-to-resolve storylines. I imagine it will be a long time before a completed epic of this cross is ever achieved. Maybe when they end the series, people will finish one. I'd try, but, like everyone else, I keep getting bogged down in the contradictions.
Comments from author:
The contradictions are hard. The whole time vs time etc make my head hurt. But I enjoy trying my hand attempting to cross the verses though.

Yeah, Dawn will not be a happy camper if she ever runs into Derek again.
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
I love it! Excellent little scenario!
Comments from author:
Thank you!! I'm so thrilled that I started watching The Sarah Connor Chronicles and then was inspired to write this little piece.
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Good job
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from (Past Donor)Snag
Review:
Interesting notion, this. Add me to the list of folks that wouldn't mind seeing more!
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you! Yes, there will be a continuation of some sort in this verse. I already have two bunnies kinda plotted out - just need to buckle down and write them!!
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from Dragonelf
Review:
You mean THAT'S IT???

Any chance you get inspired to continue the story and/or write a sequel? ::Big Puppy Eyes::

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
Um...er...Sorry? Yeah, sadly this is it, for this particular story.

However, to appease you, there are other stories in this verse planned out. I just need to write them!!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
Interesting and enjoyable read, thank you.
Comments from author:
*grins*

Thanks, hon!!
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from SilverSand
Review:
I really enjoyed this. It's a plausible idea and I can just see a bunch of slayers making the Conner's work a lot easier. Though I don't think they'd stand a chance against the Terminators in hand to hand combat, the magic would certainly level the playing field.

Any chance you'll continue this?
Comments from author:
I agree, Terminators would mop the floor with Slayers in real life. No question or doubt. But where there are Slayers, there is magic.

Yes, there are a few possibilities in this verse that I would love to explore and continue.

Thanks for the review!!
Review By [SilverSand] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from ShyBob
Review:
That loud screech in the background is a Terminator bending the fabric of the Buffyverse into a plausible crossover.
Comments from author:
*beams and blushes* Thank you! This little story was so much work for me and it makes me happy that it comes across as plausible!!
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very cool story. Cameron is becoming one of my favorite characters. Will there be more to her and Dawn's story?
Comments from author:
Thank you!! Glad to have you reviewing my stories again - I think with my recent Supernatural and/or slash trend - your reviews have been sadly missed!!

Cameron is such an amazing character. And with each episode more and more layers are shown/developed. And Summer does such an amazing, amazing job with her facial expression, body posture, etc. I such a girl!crush on Summer it isn't even funny.

Yes, there will be more. I have a future Dawn and John fic planned out that involves the actual creation of Cameron.

And then after watching the T:tSCC finale the other night a Derek, Cameron, Dawn piece popped into my head. I just need to find the time to write that bunny because it makes me so happy and it wants to come out and play.

Thanks again for the review!!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Future, By Way of the Past" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
*shamelessly borrowed from my LJ comment*

Okay... now I get to leave gushing praise in place of corrections/suggestions.

I absolutely love this idea. The fact that Dawn was the one to reprogram Cameron is great. The fact that Cameron went to look for her and couldn't find her... awesome.

I love how you did this through Cameron's eyes, because you captured the 'terminator' thought wonderfully. I read it with Summer Glau's voice in my head and that just rocked.

Wonderful job!!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, even if it is shamelessly borrowed from your LJ comment. I love it regardless.

I was kinda tickled with where my brain came up with the idea to have Cameron look for Dawn and not be able to find her because of her technically not existing yet. Wheee that was fun.

And it makes me really happy to know that Cameron's voice came through here. It wasn't easy but I'm glad it worked out!!

*squishes you* Thanks for the help with this one. I definitely appreciate your honest assessments of what worked and what didn't.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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