Definately interesting start and i hope you continue with the story

Great start! I hope you have the opportunity to continue this story at some stage.

I have a rough outline of everything and half of the next chapter finished, but I wont post it until at least two more are done, because I really don't like being a hypocrite and not finishing stories, but this one just seemed to have stuck.
I am glad that you liked it though.

A really interesting start.

I'd like to read more, but that requires that you ***write*** more!

Please?

More, please. This is an interesting beginning, and I'm interested in seeing where you go from here. Jack getting a daughter who's a Slayer should be interesting. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

I've read your reviews: since you have apparently gotten a beta, you should get him or her to read over the prologue, and fix the mistakes. As it stands the story is probably (in my opinion) in violation of the grammar/spelling rules of tth. Congrats on publishing your first english fanfic. I was too distracted to read through the whole prologue because of the mistakes, but I'll probably try the story again later, and leave a proper review. Until then: have fun writing.

Regards Tals

Yes that is my current plan, and no worries I will correct mistakes just as soon as I hear from my beta, that should be sometime today.
And thanks, I really am having fun with this idea.

I like the idea. I'm also willing to beta for you if you need it. Good luck.

Thank you!
I already got my self one, but thanks for offering.

The spelling/grammer is very distracting, have you thought of using a beta? It would 'polish' up the story I'm sure and allow for a more 'flowing' story experience....just a thought. I like the premise, hope to read more.

I'm glad you like my story, and I already found myself a beta. I'm working on my next chapter right now.

I love the plot idea, and this looks like it is going to be an awesome story. But you do need a beta, at least for spell checking. I'd love to help with that, if you want. Just let me know! I can't wait for more chapters, great work =)

I am working on the next chapter, and I found someone who is willing to help me with grammar, but I might be too horrible for that Beta and if he dumps me you will be first to hear it... ;)

It's an interesting premise and I look forward to reading more, but you do need a beta- the first sentence alone had four or five errors in it, which makes sense if English isn't your first language (and a big wow on being able to write fanfic in English if it's not!), but if you could find someone to beta, it would greatly improve the story.

Yes I already found a beta for this story; and as soon as he sends me the corrected version, I will edit this chapter, but only in grammar so you wont need to reread this chapter if you wont feel like it.
And, hey I'm just starting so I hope to become better.

Grammar and the English are a little rough but that is correctable...I do like the concept of the story...good job!

Thank you very much!

I hope she forms a friendship with Cassie... and when the SGC realizes she has super powers, they're at first going to think she's from off-world or something like that---meanwhile the slayers might think the SGC is like the Initiative (at first)--

I do have a couple ideas about that, but I wont spill this secret, you'll just have to wait and read.

nice start !
I hope you update soon, 'cause this fic premises are quite good !

I like it... really interesting beginning and I'm looking forward to see where you go with this. Really happy Willow and Tara are still together and Willow isn't with Kennedy.

Can't wait for more!

Wispr

Yes I know, I like Willow/Tara too, and they look great together.
I am writing the next chapter right now, but this one will be longer, so you will have to wait a bit, not too long though I hate slow updates and don't do that myself.
Thanks!