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Slayer O'Neill

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Review of chapter "Prologue" from Vickzie
Review:
Definately interesting start and i hope you continue with the story
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Gideon
Review:
Great start! I hope you have the opportunity to continue this story at some stage.
Comments from author:
I have a rough outline of everything and half of the next chapter finished, but I wont post it until at least two more are done, because I really don't like being a hypocrite and not finishing stories, but this one just seemed to have stuck.
I am glad that you liked it though.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from SpacedCadet
Review:
A really interesting start.

I'd like to read more, but that requires that you ***write*** more!

Please?
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from zafaran
Review:
More, please. This is an interesting beginning, and I'm interested in seeing where you go from here. Jack getting a daughter who's a Slayer should be interesting. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from tals
Review:
I've read your reviews: since you have apparently gotten a beta, you should get him or her to read over the prologue, and fix the mistakes. As it stands the story is probably (in my opinion) in violation of the grammar/spelling rules of tth. Congrats on publishing your first english fanfic. I was too distracted to read through the whole prologue because of the mistakes, but I'll probably try the story again later, and leave a proper review. Until then: have fun writing.

Regards Tals
Comments from author:
Yes that is my current plan, and no worries I will correct mistakes just as soon as I hear from my beta, that should be sometime today.
And thanks, I really am having fun with this idea.
Review By [tals] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
I like the idea. I'm also willing to beta for you if you need it. Good luck.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
I already got my self one, but thanks for offering.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from siannasilver
Review:
The spelling/grammer is very distracting, have you thought of using a beta? It would 'polish' up the story I'm sure and allow for a more 'flowing' story experience....just a thought. I like the premise, hope to read more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like my story, and I already found myself a beta. I'm working on my next chapter right now.
Review By [siannasilver] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Challenge" from MellyNorth
Review:
I love the plot idea, and this looks like it is going to be an awesome story. But you do need a beta, at least for spell checking. I'd love to help with that, if you want. Just let me know! I can't wait for more chapters, great work =)
Comments from author:
I am working on the next chapter, and I found someone who is willing to help me with grammar, but I might be too horrible for that Beta and if he dumps me you will be first to hear it... ;)
Review By [MellyNorth] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from littleoldme
Review:
It's an interesting premise and I look forward to reading more, but you do need a beta- the first sentence alone had four or five errors in it, which makes sense if English isn't your first language (and a big wow on being able to write fanfic in English if it's not!), but if you could find someone to beta, it would greatly improve the story.
Comments from author:
Yes I already found a beta for this story; and as soon as he sends me the corrected version, I will edit this chapter, but only in grammar so you wont need to reread this chapter if you wont feel like it.
And, hey I'm just starting so I hope to become better.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Grammar and the English are a little rough but that is correctable...I do like the concept of the story...good job!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AllenPitt
Review:
I hope she forms a friendship with Cassie... and when the SGC realizes she has super powers, they're at first going to think she's from off-world or something like that---meanwhile the slayers might think the SGC is like the Initiative (at first)--
Comments from author:
I do have a couple ideas about that, but I wont spill this secret, you'll just have to wait and read.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from martelcris
Review:
nice start !
I hope you update soon, 'cause this fic premises are quite good !
Review By [martelcris] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
I like it... really interesting beginning and I'm looking forward to see where you go with this. Really happy Willow and Tara are still together and Willow isn't with Kennedy.

Can't wait for more!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Yes I know, I like Willow/Tara too, and they look great together.
I am writing the next chapter right now, but this one will be longer, so you will have to wait a bit, not too long though I hate slow updates and don't do that myself.
Thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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