Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Alkeni
Update soon please? Please? I really, really want more.
Review By [Alkeni
] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from vidicon
I don't suppose you'd care to pick this one up again and finish it? Or at least update? I rather like the conniving Narcissa, though the Invasion of the Scoobie Snatchers has me slightly confused, expecially Dawn/Oriens.
Review By [vidicon
] • Date [1 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Ernestt
now i gotta ask. will this be continued or is this over cuz i really want to see how things will be resolved. i really loved Second Life also. i was surprised ho entertaining the story is. the way that you were able to make so many changes but still stay true to the potter universe is great. this stuff is awesome!!!
Review By [Ernestt
] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Meneldur
I like this story. it's fun and funny. It's also quite interesting, with lots of potential
Andromeda is fun to see, and has a better attitude than Draco - though obviously, she still has much to learn. Hmmm... perhaps next time Oriens could bring along the most powerful Wicca in the western hemisphere (and by now, probably the world) who is actually a muggle? That would actually be nice. I really loved the insertion of Dawn into this story, and I've always thought that bringing Willow into the Potterverse had so much potential for fun and chaos.And as I've said in my review to Road Trip, I feel that Willow would support Dawn, even as Oriens.
The relationship with Tracy is well-written. It's actually a real relationship, with tension and problems, not such 'i love you, let's fuck'. I quite enjoy it.
However, I enjoy a lot more Luna's idiosyncrasies. She's so much fun. I'd love to see more of her and Lara. They could double-date?
I'm surprised Andi hasn't felt the need yet to discuss with someone the trauma Bella caused her. Although the idea made me crack-up, and I really like it.
Is it just me, or is Narcissa smarter than Draco thinks she is? Because it seems to me that when she's talking with Snape she's smarter.
Well, that's about it, I think. Good story, wish it could be updated some, and if so, I want to see more of Dawn - possibly with Willow. I still love Jinni's 'in Search of the Slayer' and 'A Malfoy's Mistake'. Until next time, Meneldur.
Review By [Meneldur
] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Markelo
She's smarter and more compent then she was when she was Draco. Most be the gender.
Review By [Markelo
] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from RebeccaAshling
I like this story. It seems to me that Andromeda isn't suffering as much gender dysphoria as would be expected but as she is a Slytherin and a magic user, I'm guessing she's more adaptable than most. Certainly, her intelligence and general competence have improved - when she was Draco she was rather an idiot. Must have been the testosterone... Anyways, please finish this story if at all possible. I shall be tracking it.
Review By [RebeccaAshling
] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from deathgeonous
Huh, I like. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous
] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from OldManAlexi
I loved reading this fic while it was being written but like so many of your fics, it has entered perpetual hiatus. I am really hoping you end up coming back to it and finishing it but I know how it is. You're in the middle of writing the fic when you come up with another brilliant idea and you simply MUST write it.
I'm not sure which of us is better about this. On one hand, I refuse to post unfinished fics so no one is upset when I stop writing. On the other hand, you actually get things posted... Okay, I suck. I really should just do it your way.
Anyway, I loved the fic so far and I hope you continue this and a couple other fics at some point in the future.
Review By [OldManAlexi
] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from sopchoppy
Good Story, I am looking forward to reading more of it if you continue it.
Review By [sopchoppy
] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from deitarionSSokolow
Niiice. This has to be the first "turned into a girl, supposedly permanently" fic I've ever seen done well. The only others I've run across have this stupid shallow spin to things that seems to imply that the author thinks things like shopping and an obsession with beauty are somehow genetic traits. (not to mention, spitting on the concept of neural plasticity)
Normally, I'd worry about something like the "genderblender" (obviously a potion of some sort), but you've definitely earned the benefit of the doubt. Given what you've done so far, it'd probably end up with Andromeda being bisexual and tons of fun for us readers as she discovers that "horrifying" fact... probably by feeling attracted to Harry.
(Losing her attraction to her girlfriend would feel cheap and like an excuse to make her "fully girl" (derogatory meaning with regards to poor gender-bender authors) and having her remain merely a lesbian would be wasting an opportunity for good character interactions and reactions)
Review By [deitarionSSokolow
] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Skyefather
very very nice. I'd love to see her take Dawns offer just to get rid of the dark mark(maybe to show Tracy she really doses love her). and I got to wonder if Draco would have fallen for Tracy anyway. what else can I say but keep listening to the voices in you head do what they tell you too(the little voices wouldn't tell you to do something bad would they?) are you going to get to the het pairing soon? (not that the shower scenes should stop anytime soon.) neat plot twist would be at the end of the story to find a way to change him back and he either chooses to stay a girl (for Tracy) or Tracy realizes she fell in love with Draco not a man or woman just a person. that could create about two -three chapters worth of angst while they deal with that and come to grips with the new stitch.
Review By [Skyefather
] • Date [11 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Elenea
Malfoy as a girl, never would've thought of that..... I love the way you portray Luna, she's one of my favorite characters.
Review By [Elenea
] • Date [12 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from spring
This fic is quite fascinating. Please please update this wonderful fic again soon. I love Malfoy Sr. reaction to Draco becoming a girl. Personally I think that Draco becoming a girl is a very good thing for him so this is one of the reasons that I love this fic so much again please please update this wonderful fic again.
Review By [spring
] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from PrincessTaffy
High fives for the Lutheranism there, lol. there's actually 19 Lutheran churches... i checked, i'm a dork. you'd think that going to a freaking Lutheran college I would quit being so excited about Lutheran things, but whatevs
anyway, this is... interesting, and not what i really expected.. but still fun:-)
Review By [PrincessTaffy
] • Date [2 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from BraveLittleToaster
Wow, you write the characters really well!
This story is so addictive I was just sitting here reading chapter after chapter...After chapter.
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
Comments from author:
Doing some BSG at the moment, but this is the top of the list when I finish.
Review By [BraveLittleToaster
] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]