Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Markelo
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She's smarter and more compent then she was when she was Draco. Most be the gender.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from RebeccaAshling
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I like this story. It seems to me that Andromeda isn't suffering as much gender dysphoria as would be expected but as she is a Slytherin and a magic user, I'm guessing she's more adaptable than most. Certainly, her intelligence and general competence have improved - when she was Draco she was rather an idiot. Must have been the testosterone... Anyways, please finish this story if at all possible. I shall be tracking it.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from deathgeonous
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Huh, I like. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from OldManAlexi
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I loved reading this fic while it was being written but like so many of your fics, it has entered perpetual hiatus. I am really hoping you end up coming back to it and finishing it but I know how it is. You're in the middle of writing the fic when you come up with another brilliant idea and you simply MUST write it. I'm not sure which of us is better about this. On one hand, I refuse to post unfinished fics so no one is upset when I stop writing. On the other hand, you actually get things posted... Okay, I suck. I really should just do it your way. Anyway, I loved the fic so far and I hope you continue this and a couple other fics at some point in the future.
Review By [OldManAlexi] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from sopchoppy
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Good Story, I am looking forward to reading more of it if you continue it.
Review By [sopchoppy] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Niiice. This has to be the first "turned into a girl, supposedly permanently" fic I've ever seen done well. The only others I've run across have this stupid shallow spin to things that seems to imply that the author thinks things like shopping and an obsession with beauty are somehow genetic traits. (not to mention, spitting on the concept of neural plasticity)
Normally, I'd worry about something like the "genderblender" (obviously a potion of some sort), but you've definitely earned the benefit of the doubt. Given what you've done so far, it'd probably end up with Andromeda being bisexual and tons of fun for us readers as she discovers that "horrifying" fact... probably by feeling attracted to Harry.
(Losing her attraction to her girlfriend would feel cheap and like an excuse to make her "fully girl" (derogatory meaning with regards to poor gender-bender authors) and having her remain merely a lesbian would be wasting an opportunity for good character interactions and reactions)
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Skyefather
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very very nice. I'd love to see her take Dawns offer just to get rid of the dark mark(maybe to show Tracy she really doses love her). and I got to wonder if Draco would have fallen for Tracy anyway. what else can I say but keep listening to the voices in you head do what they tell you too(the little voices wouldn't tell you to do something bad would they?) are you going to get to the het pairing soon? (not that the shower scenes should stop anytime soon.) neat plot twist would be at the end of the story to find a way to change him back and he either chooses to stay a girl (for Tracy) or Tracy realizes she fell in love with Draco not a man or woman just a person. that could create about two -three chapters worth of angst while they deal with that and come to grips with the new stitch.
*Hugs&Kisses*
Review By [Skyefather] • Date [11 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Elenea
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Malfoy as a girl, never would've thought of that..... I love the way you portray Luna, she's one of my favorite characters.
Review By [Elenea] • Date [12 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from spring
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This fic is quite fascinating. Please please update this wonderful fic again soon. I love Malfoy Sr. reaction to Draco becoming a girl. Personally I think that Draco becoming a girl is a very good thing for him so this is one of the reasons that I love this fic so much again please please update this wonderful fic again.
Review By [spring] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from PrincessTaffy
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High fives for the Lutheranism there, lol. there's actually 19 Lutheran churches... i checked, i'm a dork. you'd think that going to a freaking Lutheran college I would quit being so excited about Lutheran things, but whatevs anyway, this is... interesting, and not what i really expected.. but still fun:-)
Review By [PrincessTaffy] • Date [2 May 08] • Not Rated
Wow, you write the characters really well! This story is so addictive I was just sitting here reading chapter after chapter...After chapter. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
Love it!
Comments from author:
Doing some BSG at the moment, but this is the top of the list when I finish.
Review By [BraveLittleToaster] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from scottm
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What the heck is going on? I am confused about the numbering now. About two weeks ago you were up to Chapter 27, now only chapter 21? Yes I can keep the evidence of your previous posts of the story. So, I love the story in spite of still hating Malfoy.
Comments from author:
I did a lot of work on the story, eliminated a number of chapters by merging, and then updated. You miss stuff like that because your access is limited.
Review By [scottm] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from shazamfan
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Nice chapter! Enjoyed the learning of how the Malfoy's escaped the worst of the inbreeding. Also enjoyed Hermoine's little rant on the shorts. Thanks for that one! :)
Poor, poor Harry. Something tells me his little idea is going to backfire big time!
-j-
PS
Got to wonder if Tracey snagged a Hooter's shirt for Andi to wear.
Comments from author:
They should... then make Andi fill out until it's fit to burst. ;)
Review By [shazamfan] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Wolflady
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Under it all, Harry is just as nasty an individual as his father before him.
Comments from author:
That was the idea. If Malfoy is going to be judged (and sometimes written) to be his father's Mini-Me, why not do the same to Harry?
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Not Rated