Review of chapter "Inner Thoughts and He's Fallen" from
LinReview:
Very interesting, especially how you have incorperated the art into the story. My only complaint is hte side scrolling, because your art is so large you have to scroll across the screen to read the story entirely. Would you consider posting a purely text version of the story, or at least alter the art to make it not side scroll?
Comments from author:
I've begun to put the words from the art underneath it, but it will take a while to get it all done. I have to have the original art open on one tab and the post in another, along with a few other tabs: my charmed RP, my Project Playlist account, etc... I apologize for not being able to update lately as I have been busy...but I won't burden you with details. Do tell me what you think of the edit so far.
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Lin] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Inner Thoughts and He's Fallen" from
SusanAnthonyReview:
I liked the pictures, very yummy, though the story was a little hard to read.
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SusanAnthony] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Inner Thoughts and He's Fallen" from
GACTsevilReview:
I really like the pic fics, it's really neat, but... it's hard to read. Instead of black use white or a light color for the text.
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GACTsevil] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Not Rated
