Incredibly intriguing story so far! I love the plot with Dawn seeing Derek and questioning him at the police station and then her finally meeting John, Sarah and Cameron. Great job! Also the adding of Andrew is awesome too. Sad about his slayers being killed though. I wonder what his connection with Cameron is? Interesting...
Anyways, thanks for writing! I would love to read more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Not Rated
technically writing style I didn't like in brackets, it makes your tale too like a movie script and not like the excellent scifi novel its turning out to be
I thought Ashanti and Siobhan were well enough described to make the chapter have added depth when they were slaughtered.
Review By [Kiwikatipo] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated
This story is freaking awesome!! You have done a great job of incorporating Dawn into the show. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Part of why it takes so long between updates is I spend a lot of time plotting out how to effectively incorporate her into the SCC universe. :-) I'm happy to hear it's been worth the headache! LOL Thank you for the review.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
WOW! This story is very intense and a little graphic. Good, but graphic. I'm curious as to how Cameron knows Andrew. Maybe through Allison? How is Dawn going to be able to keep Buffy away when two slayers were ripped to shreds? Who is the romance angle in this story? Dawn and Derek, maybe? Does Cameron know what Dawn is? Update more soon, please!
Comments from author:
LOL All very good, very valid questions... of which I'm working on ways to effectively answer. :-) Thank you for the review. In regards of the 'graphic' part... well, just keep in mind: Terminator v. Slayer! ;-) How else is it supposed to go down? Thank you for the review!
Love that you've brought Andrew into the story. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Comments from author:
Andrew is a secret fav of mine to write in... :-) How could I write something involving something so sci-fi and NOT bring him in? LOL Thanks for the review!
Review By [mokahi] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Even though I've read it already, I'll say again... LOVE it.
We get to play with Andrew. *dances
Comments from author:
Well, if it wasn't for you, woman... it wouldn't even be WRITTEN! :-) Thanks for being so patient with me and allowing me to constantly bounce new plot ideas off of you! *hugs*
Review By [dharkcharlotte] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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