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msdarque Review:
Fun and hot and great to read! :D Congrats and kudos!
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msdarque ] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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twlight Review:
wonderful story.
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twlight ] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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jgoodman Review:
good story
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jgoodman ] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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TouchoftheWind Review:
Awesome
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TouchoftheWind ] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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DarkFaerieYumi Review:
YAY! I loved it! It was so cute! I love it! I love it! I love it!
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DarkFaerieYumi ] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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spring Review:
This is a wonderful story. I can only claim one mistake: You changed the party or tense of how it was being written back and forth. You went from third party to first person. Third party is like watching something and first person has a lot of "knows, asks, will" when a person is thinking to themselves or after a person asked a question. Other than that I didn't find any mistakes. Again I love this wonderful story and I look forward to reading more of this.
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spring ] • Date [31 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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Dragonelf Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad:: #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# Live out of your imagination, not your history. - Stephen Covey #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
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Dragonelf ] • Date [25 May 09] • Not Rated
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BlackRose Review:
G-pa, oh that is priceless. Somehow I could picture Xander child calling Giles that.
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BlackRose ] • Date [24 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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zafaran Review:
I've been enjoying this story. In reply to your question about HP mpreg stories, there was a dedicated site that seems to have gone defunct, but CaliaDragon has a group on Google Groups for the topic. Here's the link:
http://groups.google.com/group/HarryPotterMpreg?hl=en Hope this helps,
Zafaran
{mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran ] • Date [24 May 09] • Not Rated
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nightslayer Review:
awwww. . .thats so cute!
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nightslayer ] • Date [23 May 09] • Not Rated
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silvergaurd Review:
Fantastic last chapter. Would love to see a sequel!
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silvergaurd ] • Date [23 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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winnie Review:
what a blast! really funny thank you
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winnie ] • Date [23 May 09] • Not Rated
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slmncpm Review:
i do love this. *smiles* and giles torturing sev is too priceless. heh. thanks!
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slmncpm ] • Date [23 May 09] • Not Rated
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lothlorien Review:
great story. what charming friends xander has... it took them a whole year? that's... slightly alarming ;P please continue soon
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lothlorien ] • Date [16 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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WarpedMinded Review:
Very Nice. Please don't wait too long before making another chapter. This story is very good.
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WarpedMinded ] • Date [10 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]