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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NimbustheMariner
Small problem. The amulet actively relied on the bearer having a soul.
Comments from author:
Ah, this is one of those things were I'm gonna have to go back and reread before I could properly respond, because of real life I've been away from my fanfics entirely for quite some time. But I do know this is one of the fanfics that I knew I would have to go back and edit at some point, but was going on with the overall story first. Of course, now even that has stalled (ever so slightly).

Anyway, thank you for reading and reviewing.
Review By [NimbustheMariner] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from deathgeonous
Hmm, good stuff. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [21 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
excellent fic so far! Looking forward to more. Is the demon staying away because Buffy is looting as a pirate?
Comments from author:
*grins* Since the demon will eventually explain himself I probably shouldn't say anything here, though I admit it will be a little while before that happens.

Glad you are enjoying this fanfic.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [27 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zapoteca
I love this story a lot, and I feel obliged to comment
I only have one lament
In one line
While the others are fine
Spike calls Giles Geeves
I believe the thing you meant to say was Jeeves
This name applies to our most beloved watcher
because it was the name of a comedic character
(yes those last two lines do rhyme)
Jeeves is a valet in some stories by Wodehouse- a British author most sublime
whose most defining accent is his tendency to speak in a most stuffy style
making use of Shakespeare quotes and fancy vocabulary all the while
so, thank you so much for posting this fiction
I hope you so not mind my criticism of your spelling and diction
Comments from author:
I do not mind at all, actually I'm glad for it. I'm not perfect and I don't mind when someone points out that I've made a boo-boo, and I do sometimes make lots of them.

What's funny is that me and my spell checker have a love/hate relationship. For example, it hates me for writing Xander so much that it decided to get prissy and neglected to inform me that I spelled Xadner instead of Xander.

For this fanfic I caught Xadner myself, but it wouldn't surprise me to be reading some of my other fanfics and catch it there as well. Cause after awhile (I shamefully admit) that I do stop really looking when it keeps flagging the same things over and over again. What's interesting is that it flags Xander (and Snape) every time, but doesn't flag things like Buggy (for Buffy) or in the case of this fanfic Geeves - if that had been flagged perhaps I wouldn't have made that mistake, perhaps.

Anyway, I'm glad you're liking this fic, and that you left a rhyming review (I really didn't expect to get one) and that you helped me correct a mistake.
Review By [zapoteca] • Date [14 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChloeWinchester
Very interesting story so far. Can't wait for the next one. Update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. Unless something goes very wrong, you shouldn't have to wait long for an update here because I do have the rough draft complete.
Review By [ChloeWinchester] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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