Small problem. The amulet actively relied on the bearer having a soul.
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Ah, this is one of those things were I'm gonna have to go back and reread before I could properly respond, because of real life I've been away from my fanfics entirely for quite some time. But I do know this is one of the fanfics that I knew I would have to go back and edit at some point, but was going on with the overall story first. Of course, now even that has stalled (ever so slightly).
excellent fic so far! Looking forward to more. Is the demon staying away because Buffy is looting as a pirate?
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*grins* Since the demon will eventually explain himself I probably shouldn't say anything here, though I admit it will be a little while before that happens.
I love this story a lot, and I feel obliged to comment I only have one lament In one line While the others are fine Spike calls Giles Geeves I believe the thing you meant to say was Jeeves This name applies to our most beloved watcher because it was the name of a comedic character (yes those last two lines do rhyme) Jeeves is a valet in some stories by Wodehouse- a British author most sublime whose most defining accent is his tendency to speak in a most stuffy style making use of Shakespeare quotes and fancy vocabulary all the while so, thank you so much for posting this fiction I hope you so not mind my criticism of your spelling and diction
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I do not mind at all, actually I'm glad for it. I'm not perfect and I don't mind when someone points out that I've made a boo-boo, and I do sometimes make lots of them.
What's funny is that me and my spell checker have a love/hate relationship. For example, it hates me for writing Xander so much that it decided to get prissy and neglected to inform me that I spelled Xadner instead of Xander.
For this fanfic I caught Xadner myself, but it wouldn't surprise me to be reading some of my other fanfics and catch it there as well. Cause after awhile (I shamefully admit) that I do stop really looking when it keeps flagging the same things over and over again. What's interesting is that it flags Xander (and Snape) every time, but doesn't flag things like Buggy (for Buffy) or in the case of this fanfic Geeves - if that had been flagged perhaps I wouldn't have made that mistake, perhaps.
Anyway, I'm glad you're liking this fic, and that you left a rhyming review (I really didn't expect to get one) and that you helped me correct a mistake.
Review By [zapoteca] • Date [14 Mar 08] • Not Rated