Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DavidFraser
A well written read. Which I read !
Yes, enjoyed it.
Review By [DavidFraser
] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rynx
Did you have to post on Rhyming day?
So that now in verse Im forced to say.
I never did expect to see
an Indigo crossover with Buffy.
Of rhyming skills, I have but few
this story though deserves review
For Indigo is a fave of mine
and this idea suits me quite fine
Please more of this storymay there be
When of verse constraints I am Free.
Comments from author:
Indigo has (ever since I first read it and compared it to Buffy) seemed to be the very thing that the Slayer started as. One girl, tasked with the destruction of the demons plaguing the world...
Of course, looking at what I put up I'm still rather disappointed in it - it jumps around far too much and leaves out critical points that would clarify this or that, and the teaser is way too vague and the twist that makes it work with the story was completely left out.
Ah well. Back to the writing boards...
Review By [Rynx
] • Date [14 Mar 08] • Not Rated