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Review of chapter "Despair" from ultor
Review:
this was really good i hope you get inspired to continue it
Review By [ultor] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from FicChick
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Judging from its age I'm guessing this fic is abandoned. I'll track it on the off chance you get inspired to continue it.
Review By [FicChick] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from oldgirllost
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I really wish you would update this---it was a good beginning and a good idea
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from aveave
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This story is great. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Review By [aveave] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Despair" from micedden
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are you going to finish this fic sometime soon
Review By [micedden] • Date [1 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from spring
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Interesting, more soon of this possibly wonderful fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Despair" from danyaelofazkaban
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Thus far an intriguing concept. I look forward to witnessing Daniel's reaction to the news.
Review By [danyaelofazkaban] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from zafaran
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I definitely think Xander needs a new lawyer. Xander also needs to surface from his shock and put a few numbers together. Daniel was born in 1964 (I don't know about other states or countries, but my birth certificate includes my parents's age at my birth), so he was a father when he was 17. Children born to children at that age are most often given up for adoption. Just because Daniel has since bettered himself from being a foster child lost in the system, what he is currently isn't what he was when Xander was conceived and born. I can see Daniel doing anything he could to keep his child from being dumped into the same system he'd been shoved into when Nicholas Ballard refused to release rights so that Daniel could be adopted when he was 8 after his parents were killed. If that required signing off on release of parental rights so Xander could be adopted, I can see Daniel choosing to make the decision. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
Thank you so, so much! **warm, happy happy feeling** Compliments are always nice, and yeah, that's Daniel through and through, isn't it?
And you never know, I could write some more!!! Maybe. If my muse wasn't such a vindictive prick. :)
~halfbreedcreature
Review By [zafaran] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from limejuize
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I love the story so far. I like the idea of Daniel being Xander's dad and this fic has a very promising beginning and I wait wait for more!! Please update soon! *begs for more, with a very sad pathetic puppy dog look on my face*
Review By [limejuize] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from Chaoskitten
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updateage?

I wants some.

*offers cookies and smarties and M&M's*
chaos
Comments from author:
Dude, I would love to - but you know how it is. School and that jazz. But all that chocolate is so tempting...
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [26 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from PrincessTaffy
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This is a pretty good start to a story, you're characters are well written and act like themselves, and i'm curious to see what else you do with it...
However, i don't mean to be nitpicky but the premise you're basing your story on is pretty inaccurate... You don't need your birth certificate to renew a drivers license, only to get one for the first time. A better situation to use might be that Xander needs to get his passport so that he can go abroad for work with the Watcher's Council.
The other thing is that you don't need a lawyer to get a copy of your birth certificate... in California, you fill out a form and send it and $14 to the CA office of vital records, or you can go to the county of your birth's office of vital records and apply in person for a couple dollars more. I believe you can get a lawyer to do it, but I don't see why anyone would... Anyway I hope you find this information useful and keep working on your writing!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment, and thanks for the advice. I don't exactly know how the United States legal system works, hell, not even MY legal system, so I just went with what first came to mind. :-) I'm really busy right now - high school SUCKS - so I might not get to it all that soon. But thanks. This is the kind of stuff I was hoping for! ;-)
Review By [PrincessTaffy] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from Elleria
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Is good so far. Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
So am I. :-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [21 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Despair" from Duskie
Review:
I look forward to seeing where this is going.
Comments from author:
Merci
Review By [Duskie] • Date [18 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
I like it. Keep it coming.
Comments from author:
I like it too.:-) Merci.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Despair" from stasa
Review:
Interesting. I'd like to see more, update soon...
Comments from author:
Merci.
Review By [stasa] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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