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Review of chapter "Prologue" from FireWolfe
Review:
wishing this was not a dead fic
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [29 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from garrycooper
Review:
Great story! Would love to see more when you have a chance.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [14 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from kalahari
Review:
I like your more mature Buffy a lot.

She still rushes into things and doesn't take enough downtime to recover. Her chances would be better if there would be someone she trusts enough, who could talk her into taking the time to recover. But currently that could only be Joyce or Jack some time after their introduction to the weird. She would need at least half a year with Giles and maybe Dr. Gregory.

In some chapters she is a bit to much Superbuffy and relies to much on good luck to survive. Perhaps you could tone that down if you are doing a rewrite.

It would be nice if Angelus/Angel gets a suitable end like:
- getting dusted from draining a saint
- getting torn apart by the hyena pack
- getting ended by Wolfram and Hart because they are unsatisfied with him
- being at the wrong place at the wrong time
- something involving a serious amount of thermite
before Buffy can get the information about Charlie from him.

Regards
Review By [kalahari] • Date [20 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from spikeismine
Review:
Awesome! But is there going to be any stargate related stuff because I'd love to see that. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from Oddshot
Review:
I must say I am enjoying reading this story this is a most interesting crossover, I do hope your Muse will let you update this story sooner rather than later .
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from Vickzie
Review:
Interesting story
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from FireWolfe
Review:
I really would love to see more of this fic.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Well, I believe that Buffy should be looking into why she lost her magic powers (after saving Lindsey and Giles)!! And I do hope that the author will be able to continue with this exciting story.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from bradsan
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look at all those reviews, the people who liked to read this story and asking for an update. How can you resist that.
Please update
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from serenityselena
Review:
great story ...
intriguing plot ... nice twists.....
hope you will continue the story^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Interesting idea, I have to admit.

The concept of something abducting Charlie is definitely interesting on its own, but add in the twist that Cyvus Vail was responsible and you created a rather interesting blend of the two series.

Interesting twist with Buffy studying magic- given Vail’s presence in her life and her pre-existing combat experience it makes sense that she’d try to learn other methods of dealing with her enemies than just physical combat-, and, with her greater military training and surer knowledge of herself and her goals, her decision to ‘reject’ any attempts on Xander’s part to help out make a certain sense.

I was initially dissatisfied with your almost stupidly brief use of Angel, but the discovery that Wolfram & Hart had extracted Angel’s soul rather than Darla triggering the clause dealt with some of that; bringing Angel in just to take him out of the picture that quickly is still a bit of a downer (He was always my favourite character), but at least this way you’re not insulting Angel’s memory by saying that Darla would have made him PERFECTLY happy at this point in his life, when by all rights, even without the fact that she never made him ‘happy’ as a vampire, he should have been ashamed of himself for succumbing to his instincts and sleeping with her after working for so long to become someone who could help Buffy.

(That’s not to say I’m not still hoping that Angel won’t come back; I’m just saying that I’m happier with this version of events regarding him being ‘taken out of the picture’)

Well, here’s hoping that Lindsey’s ‘deception’ is exposed soon and Buffy makes some progress in her search for Vail (Preferably both at the same time); keep up the good work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from FireWolfe
Review:
Love to see more.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – Who’s the Alpha? Part 2" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
:D
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from FireWolfe
Review:
Any chance of an update?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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