I realise I had sort of a hissy fit in my last review, and I apologise for that. My rating for this story is 10 out of 10. I just hope that you finish this story.
Review By [DORKLORD] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Awesome chap. It's nicely done. But it seems like business is getting back to ab-normal in both the Hellmouth and Wizarding Britain. *sigh* And to think Harry really wonders why his "relatives" or his "friends" think Harry seems moody most of the time.
Review By [DORKLORD] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Secrets are about to be revealed?? I hope?? And how is it that Dumbles didn't figure out where Harry was?! I mean, seriously he's been tracking Harry's life,(in canon,and fanfiction more-so.), I'm very surprised that Dumbles didn't have Harry's apparition location to the exact foot/meter. Some of those "silver objects" were destroyed beyond repair but not all of them. On the whole so far, a decent fic.
Review By [DORKLORD] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Oooh... Secrets are so juicy, I'm surprised Skeeter's not hovering around somewhere with that that acid-green quill of her's. It's almost as if she's drawn to Harry's pain and misery like a moth to a flame.
Review By [DORKLORD] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Hopeful, nice to see Buffy and Harry get out of the house. Aside from a spelling error, Mundungus, I forgot how you spelled it. A common mistake, and as far as I'm concerned a stupid name.
Review By [DORKLORD] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Well, I really did think you gave up on this story. Another good short chapter. I think that what Dumbledore and the order are doing to harry as well as the council are doing to Buffy sucks. I can't believe that Sirius of all people in your story is siding with Dumbledore. The guy who broke out of jail to keep his godson safe. Also the way he takes risks as a marauder. Remus I can understand, but Sirius. Also, Dumbledore's promise was that he never see Buffy again. Not that he leaves his protection. Also, how was Voldemort aware of Buffy when he was in Albania as a wraith? None of his followers could get close enough because of the blood wards?
Review By [mwinter] • Date [26 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Actually, they would have been eleven together using their canon birthdays. Buffy's canon birthday is six months after Harry's. If you just change the year, then you're simply making her six months older than him, instead of six months younger. It's still the same age difference. Food for thought.
Ok wand magic doesn't work well on the hellmouth. Do potions? Cause a batch of healing potions could really come in handy....just a thought. Hm, I wonder if Angelus might do something against HP when he gets released. Probably wouldn't head for England though. Might send him some sketches that would annoy/horrify. It's interesting to realize that the whole Voldemort thing will probably be over by the time Buffy season 3 is (maybe the Mayor & Voldemort are in communication?). I could see HP offering to help against Glory later on. Or maybe it turns out Dawn can use a wand (glowing green magical core after all). Might be fun if, being behind the wards of Hogwarts when Dawn comes into being, HP's memories don't get altered, so he knows from the start that Buffy doesn't have a sister?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Not Rated
