This story is looking pretty promising so far and I am looking forward to read more chapters.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
I'm not really sure how dark or how AU you are going with this, but it is very interestinng in the shades of gray so far. At the least Tom will become more well-rounded and less one-dimensional.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Very Interesting premise! Ethan and Ripper trying to make 'Timmy' into the Artful Dodger. I'd say they were a bad influence, but the boy already was bad. heh. Can't wait until the next chapter. :)
Review By [misterq] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Wow, very interesting. I almost wish you had waited to post the first chapter until you had a bit more complted. Thoguh i may have not discovered it if that was hte case because i don't check TTH daily.
