Okay, this is interesting. I reread this story because I couldn't remember what is going on in this one. I have to wonder how Dawn is related to Jack, it should be interesting on how Dawn reacts to this news. I am very eager for the next installment of this wonderful story.
Review By [spring] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm really liking this- the switch from third person to first person took me off guard, but I've still enjoyed every chapter. I'm fascinated to see how Dawn fits into this world.
One question on the timeline- if this is happening shortly after Glory, why is Dawn eighteen? Shouldn't she be 14 or 15ish? Or is the Stargate-universe Dawn older?
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
ok, different dimension, new memories (people think they know her) --the Dawn-spell has been re-set. And the Goa'uld are after her. Poor Dawn. Maybe she jumped through the portal instead of Buffy? One wonders why a Goa'uld is after her.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Okay, I just found this story and am really hoping that you will write more! Who hit her? And what kinds of hurt will be laid upon them by SGC for doing so? How did Dawn get there in the first place without all the universes going kablooey? Will the Scoobies track her down? Inquiring minds want to know!
Review By [Alyssara] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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