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Finding the Dawn

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Review of chapter "Waking Up" from Glumski
Review:
Well, this is quite good. I really like the characterization of Dawn and what you can glimpse of the plot by now; it all seems very interesting. The change in perspective from third to first point of view from C1 to C2 was a bit surprising but I have to say that I like the inner dialogues of Dawn very much.
I hope you'll continue this someday; it has a lot of potential.
Review By [Glumski] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost" from garrycooper
Review:
Good Story
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost" from garrycooper
Review:
Good, please keep writing.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost" from Damia
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Seriously? You're just gonna leave us here salivating for more?
Review By [Damia] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost" from spacey
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oh, jack IS her daddy
Review By [spacey] • Date [28 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost" from spring
Review:
Okay, this is interesting. I reread this story because I couldn't remember what is going on in this one. I have to wonder how Dawn is related to Jack, it should be interesting on how Dawn reacts to this news. I am very eager for the next installment of this wonderful story.
Review By [spring] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost" from saturnssailor
Review:
Awesome story! Please update soon!
Review By [saturnssailor] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost" from banner
Review:
Poor Dawn. She managed to walk into probably the only bar on the planet that had a goa'uld in it...
Review By [banner] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost" from littleoldme
Review:
I'm really liking this- the switch from third person to first person took me off guard, but I've still enjoyed every chapter. I'm fascinated to see how Dawn fits into this world.

One question on the timeline- if this is happening shortly after Glory, why is Dawn eighteen? Shouldn't she be 14 or 15ish? Or is the Stargate-universe Dawn older?
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost" from spk
Review:
Just found this and I am definitely intrigued. What a captivating start?! Can't wait to read more. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost" from Clandestine
Review:
Awesome chapter!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, different dimension, new memories (people think they know her) --the Dawn-spell has been re-set. And the Goa'uld are after her. Poor Dawn. Maybe she jumped through the portal instead of Buffy? One wonders why a Goa'uld is after her.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Calling" from Alyssara
Review:
Okay, I just found this story and am really hoping that you will write more! Who hit her? And what kinds of hurt will be laid upon them by SGC for doing so? How did Dawn get there in the first place without all the universes going kablooey? Will the Scoobies track her down? Inquiring minds want to know!
Review By [Alyssara] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Calling" from imokit
Review:
Good story, please write more!
Review By [imokit] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Calling" from spring
Review:
Okay this is interesting so far. I like what this is at this point, please update again soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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