I like it and would love to take up the challenge one day.

Fire

This is a wonderful story. It is a bit sad that you chose to not write more of it.

I really liked it and hope some one does adopt it. Great job.

Ok, that was just awesome and unexpected. I really hope you keep writing, or at lest that someone picks this story up, cause that last twist was great.

Okay... You've got my attention

Cool Twist 1st cousins ewww! That does make Faith head of house black ans shouldn't her last name be Black not Lestrange and might not they find that out on the family Tapestry ! I agree this time line Dawn's Draco twin! How's he going to react to having two sisters. One not only as mush a brat as he is but is his twin as well !

I have to admit I hestated at first to even let first cousins anywhere near each other, but then I did some research and figured that if it was ok for Queen Victoria, Albert Einstein and Charles Darwin (lol) then it should be ok for the most famous inbreeding family in Harry Potter universe. I now come to believe that the only reason why we didn't have any 1st cousin couples in HP is because it was originally was intended as the book for kids. Faith's first and last names are the ones she was given at birth and noone really knows for sure how exactly tapestry works ;)

Ha! That's some twisted stuff. Kinda wish you would keep going. Hopefully you'll come back to it, or someone will pick it up for you.

Glad you like it. Maybe I will post a challenge later and link this story to it. Who knows maybe we will be lucky.

Interesting ideas. When you have a few minutes you might want to take a look at the spell / grammar checker you are using.

Well thanks for the tip I guess. That is one of the reason I have given up on this. My English grammar skills are not up to the level I want them to be to pull off this story properly. And it is very time consuming for me writing in English.

Excellent

Thanks

Ha, Buffy got kidnapped. Dawn will love the irony in that.

But, I'm pretty sure that wizards and witches need to have their wands to apperate. Although I suppose it's not that important of a detail.

Well I checked the Wiki and it said nothing about wand, only about movement with hand. I could always rewrite it I guess.

O.K. story but it would be interesting if you had dawn fall in love with harry considering she is a Malfoy

Maybe in following story, but I wouldn't count on it. I am not sure I could pull off romance.

No fair!!!

More please.

Granted

Interesting start. I really hope to see more soon.

Thanks. I hope I can keep it interesting

Real family stories are a personal favourite of mine, mostly because they can completely throw around a universe without really being *that* far fetched. The ones where Buffy is real family of a 'baddy' is even better ;)

Looking forward to reading more :)

Yeah I know, I had to shift Buffyverse timeline 7 years back in order to make it work. I hope it won't hurt the story too much. Enjoy next chapeter :)

This looks like it's going to be a fun read! Nice work so far. Wonder how Draco is going to react to having two sisters. Especially since if my calculations are correct, you've placed them in a timeline that makes Dawn his magically created twin... dun, dun, DUN!!

Poor Faith, though. It would have been funnier if she was Sirius' kid, and they had to do some digging to figure out who her mom was. Just my 2 cents. Happy writing. ^_^

Yeah they are around the same age, alas I didn't intend it to be this way. maybe I should give it some more thought ;)

And I disagree Faith makes an excellent Lestrange. But thanks for review anyway. Hope you enjoy next chapeter.