Review of chapter "chapter 3" from Gideon
must be nice to be immortal! A bit of a shock though. Handy that they were hanging around nearby with their base star and human crews.
What will they do now?
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [21 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from Immortal
Ahhh...like a junkie I've needed my BSG fix since the end of Razor...and I got it!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Review By [Immortal
] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 2" from MBB
I'm sorry, but I'm not convinced by this story, they get along too easy for a BSG story.
The summary caught my attention because I thought Cally might be a slayer (this is TTH after all :-) ) but I kept reading after discovering it was a non-crossover because I thought the idea of Cally being a cylon could make for a very dramatic story.
But the trust you have the characters place in eachother feels very AU to me, especially for characters from BSG. Of course it's your right as writer to go that way, but better negative feedback then no feedback, right?
Example of what I mean:
[quote]Sharon is right Cally. I was wrong to jump on the bandwagon of paranoia and send those marines after you. I should have known from the three years you spent on board prior to the attacks, and the last three years following, including your involvement in the resistance on New Caprica that you were not a threat. Please forgive my doubts.” Adama requests. “Guard. Unlock the cell door.” [/quote]
We've seen on the show that this would be much more then a justified doubt, as exactly the same happened with Boomer - who had been living there just as long and even tried to fight it. Cally and Adama of all people should remember this.
Comments from author:
my only defense for this drivel is i was stoned and fighting writers block. my apologies, this story sucked.
Review By [MBB
] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Not Rated