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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheatricalBarrister
You had me until the end. I was confused about Buffy's thanking the doctor when the doctor hadn't actually done what she'd asked. The only thing I can think of was that Dawn's argument had actually worked, but the story doesn't make it clear to me.
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I get what you mean. This is one that I'm gonna go back to when I have the chance. It was pretty rushed wonderfully late at night.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [3 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Hmmmm...very good up to the last few lines. I'm waiting for the punchline and...and...nothing. Bit of a disappointment.

On the plus side it was well written with no glaring errors, it just fell a bit flat for me at the end.

All the best,
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheBooknerd
Very funny. You definitely need to write about Spike taking her to the pharmacy.
Review By [TheBooknerd] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from immortalwizardelffan
LMAO! Oh Goddess! Too cute. I could just see Spike's face and the phrases "Are you out of you bloody mind?!", the patented big brother glare along with "All right, who is he and when can I drain him?", as well as "No way Bit, you can't make me go in there."
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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